Recession
Quatrains about recession and effects38 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I liked your positive conclusion with light at the end of the tunnel! It's amazing how much of the world is suffering in these fractured economic times. Your quatrains conveyed the mood well, and I admired your rhymes. -Joan
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2011
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I liked your positive conclusion with light at the end of the tunnel! It's amazing how much of the world is suffering in these fractured economic times. Your quatrains conveyed the mood well, and I admired your rhymes. -Joan
Comment Written 20-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2011
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Thanks for your kind review my friend, Ine. Take care and have a nice day.
Comment from Dougspoetry
My favorite lin, "All we can do is pray." The truth is God is in control and if we stay close to Him we'll be ok. Nice poem and perspective!
God Bless!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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My favorite lin, "All we can do is pray." The truth is God is in control and if we stay close to Him we'll be ok. Nice poem and perspective!
God Bless!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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Thanks for your kind review. Blessings and have a nice day. Ine
Comment from Cassie Needham
Great poem about a subject that is hard to write about. We all are feeling the dark cloud of recession over us. I like the bright spot at the end, that all hope is not lost. Congrats on the All Time Best!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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Great poem about a subject that is hard to write about. We all are feeling the dark cloud of recession over us. I like the bright spot at the end, that all hope is not lost. Congrats on the All Time Best!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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Thanks for your kind review. Blessings and have a nice day. Ine
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Your welcome!
Comment from catch22
The rhythm and rhyme in the poem are good and the poem sounds great when read aloud. I like your rhyme choices- sorbet/day and disclosed/predisposed (very inventive).
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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The rhythm and rhyme in the poem are good and the poem sounds great when read aloud. I like your rhyme choices- sorbet/day and disclosed/predisposed (very inventive).
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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Thanks for your kind review. Blessings and have a nice day. Ine
Comment from writerwish
This is a good illustration of how bad could lead to worse. And it probably will until the real intervention comes. The one keep praying for.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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This is a good illustration of how bad could lead to worse. And it probably will until the real intervention comes. The one keep praying for.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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Thanks for your kind review. Blessings and have a nice day. Ine
Comment from adewpearl
Good use of abab rhyming in your quatrains, Robina.
The house market froze - housing market
good alliteration in people promise and good consonance of B sounds in bouquet nor sorbet
good consonance of P sounds in play/predisposed/pray
Excellent social/political commentary :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Good use of abab rhyming in your quatrains, Robina.
The house market froze - housing market
good alliteration in people promise and good consonance of B sounds in bouquet nor sorbet
good consonance of P sounds in play/predisposed/pray
Excellent social/political commentary :-) Brooke
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind review. Blessings, Ine.
So glad you obviously really liked it Brooke.
Comment from donette1914
Good photo it goes very well with what you wrote. Very creative and powerful! your choice was written very well very believable very good!!!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Good photo it goes very well with what you wrote. Very creative and powerful! your choice was written very well very believable very good!!!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind review. Blessings, Ine
Comment from Osiek
predispose'
an interesting word
why use the apostrophe at all? Was it to give a softer ending to help your poem?
That is an interesting thought...clever...
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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predispose'
an interesting word
why use the apostrophe at all? Was it to give a softer ending to help your poem?
That is an interesting thought...clever...
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind review. Blessings, Ine.
No syllable counting difficult for me and thought it was nessesary, but it is not.
Thanks for noticing, will change.
Comment from MarquisdeMars
I love how you choose a subject most people would avoid for your poem. I also love the overall rhyme scheme. Good job on showing how good times will come again. Excellent.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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I love how you choose a subject most people would avoid for your poem. I also love the overall rhyme scheme. Good job on showing how good times will come again. Excellent.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind review. Blessings, Ine
Comment from Linda England Bonam
The recession has hit us all very hard. You are afraid to make a move in case it is the wrong one. One day the stock market seems to be okay and then it plunges. Fears for everyone! Nicely written, about a sour subject!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
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The recession has hit us all very hard. You are afraid to make a move in case it is the wrong one. One day the stock market seems to be okay and then it plunges. Fears for everyone! Nicely written, about a sour subject!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind review. Blessings, Ine
