Meandering Memories of an Old Woman
Remembering my life, have and have nots.75 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
We must be happy with what we have been blest to have in our everyday. No need to compare ourselves. We are fine just as we are. Well thought out and clearly written. Great visual imageries and storytelling. Nice work :)
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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We must be happy with what we have been blest to have in our everyday. No need to compare ourselves. We are fine just as we are. Well thought out and clearly written. Great visual imageries and storytelling. Nice work :)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you, sunnilicious. Linda
Comment from royowen
I wrote something of the real riches of this life, and those passing sweetmeats that the rich an famous have tasted as you write of in this magnificent, I am so grateful for these riches that you speak of here, the love of a wonderful wonderful woman, two adult children who honour us, and their offspring who we adore, God has been so good to collective us, we have even been to Arlington, when our daughter lived in New York, superbly written Linda, you have mentioned the true riches of life, all due to God's love. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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I wrote something of the real riches of this life, and those passing sweetmeats that the rich an famous have tasted as you write of in this magnificent, I am so grateful for these riches that you speak of here, the love of a wonderful wonderful woman, two adult children who honour us, and their offspring who we adore, God has been so good to collective us, we have even been to Arlington, when our daughter lived in New York, superbly written Linda, you have mentioned the true riches of life, all due to God's love. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Roy.
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My pleasure Linda
Comment from Patricia1
I really enjoyed this piece! As I read this it made me think what really does make us wealthy. It sounds as though you have lived very richly in all that you've done in your life. I would much rather pray with others, save a toddler from drowning, stand by the ocean and breath in the beauty God has given us, etc. then to live in a mansion surrounded by costly inanimate objects that can not know what an inspiration to others you have been. Good job!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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I really enjoyed this piece! As I read this it made me think what really does make us wealthy. It sounds as though you have lived very richly in all that you've done in your life. I would much rather pray with others, save a toddler from drowning, stand by the ocean and breath in the beauty God has given us, etc. then to live in a mansion surrounded by costly inanimate objects that can not know what an inspiration to others you have been. Good job!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Patricia1. Linda
Comment from TammyGail
This was a well written poem for sure ....
I enjoyed reading this ..
You had a force of passion behind your words
The imagery was perfect......
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2011
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This was a well written poem for sure ....
I enjoyed reading this ..
You had a force of passion behind your words
The imagery was perfect......
Comment Written 14-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2011
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TammyGail, thanks for the read and comments. livelylinda
Comment from linsbm
This is like a memoir drafted in a poem in a free verse style. It has a strong appeal to emotions. It has warm tone and language so honestly told narrative of life. The picture adds to the feelings of sincerity of thoughts that was enfolded in this memorable and nice poetry.
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2011
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This is like a memoir drafted in a poem in a free verse style. It has a strong appeal to emotions. It has warm tone and language so honestly told narrative of life. The picture adds to the feelings of sincerity of thoughts that was enfolded in this memorable and nice poetry.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2011
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linsbm, this is a totally honest view of my life and I'm so happy that you found it to be a good poem. livelylinda
