Freestylin'
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Deep Within"A collection of poems about writing
6 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
excellent use of alliterative S words
I also like the alliterative phrase, lies latently
I like the dance/trance rhyming pair
I like the progression to more rhyme in with the abab closing quatrain
a most interesting look at the creative process :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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excellent use of alliterative S words
I also like the alliterative phrase, lies latently
I like the dance/trance rhyming pair
I like the progression to more rhyme in with the abab closing quatrain
a most interesting look at the creative process :-) Brooke
Comment Written 14-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review, Brooke - Cally
Comment from sense.life
Wow! The picture captures the reader's attention and then, the words which, flow as beautifully, keep the readers focus! This is an excellent poem!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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Wow! The picture captures the reader's attention and then, the words which, flow as beautifully, keep the readers focus! This is an excellent poem!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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Thank you for such encouraging words, sense.life (cool pen name btw!) Cheers - Cally :)
Comment from MAMONIA
What great lengths you have gone to
to bring this message across.
Yes I believe also in the divine
force and it seems the "force is
definitely with you.
You have gone the whole route
with this poem and it shows the
effort put forth.
Much luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2011
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What great lengths you have gone to
to bring this message across.
Yes I believe also in the divine
force and it seems the "force is
definitely with you.
You have gone the whole route
with this poem and it shows the
effort put forth.
Much luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much for such an enthusiastic and reassuring review, Marie - much appreciated :)
Comment from LifesLilly
I enjoyed reading your free style poem. The words you chose, in my opinion, were well placed. The use of words to push the reader to use their own interpretation n imagination is well done. Thank you for sharing your passion
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2011
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I enjoyed reading your free style poem. The words you chose, in my opinion, were well placed. The use of words to push the reader to use their own interpretation n imagination is well done. Thank you for sharing your passion
Comment Written 13-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful and helpful review, LifesLilly (great pen name btw!) You have great insight when you say "The use of words to push the reader to use their own interpretation n imagination..." I had not really thought of it from that angle, but now WILL when I write future poems, so THANK YOU! Cally :)))
Comment from c_lucas
There is definitely a Creative Energy field that is available to each of us. The source has a hand in everything that id creative, be it fine art, science or an idea that will benefit all of mankind. Very well written. I appreciate the honor you have bestowed upon me. c_lucas (Aka Charlie.)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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There is definitely a Creative Energy field that is available to each of us. The source has a hand in everything that id creative, be it fine art, science or an idea that will benefit all of mankind. Very well written. I appreciate the honor you have bestowed upon me. c_lucas (Aka Charlie.)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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Hi Charlie,
thank you so much for your thoughtful review (and for the inspiraion too!) So sorry this reply is so late. Thanks again - Cally :)))
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You're welcome, Cally.Charlie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this poem about the muse that works while you are trying to sleep, i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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this is very well written, mystery writer, a great job writing this poem about the muse that works while you are trying to sleep, i wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much for all your supportive reviews, sweetwoodjax - Cally :)))
