Stosur the Dozer
Tongue in Cheek Bouncy Limerick. Tennis Anyone?26 total reviews
Comment from ameyrowitz
This is a fine limerick. The humor is superb. I'm not sure of the need for capitalizing "You've", and after "bulldozer" a period rather than a comma might work better. But overall, this is a very enjoyable verse.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
  |
This is a fine limerick. The humor is superb. I'm not sure of the need for capitalizing "You've", and after "bulldozer" a period rather than a comma might work better. But overall, this is a very enjoyable verse.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
-
Thanks so much. I appreciate your thoughtful review. Fixed those spags. Have a nice day.
Closet
Comment from Cheryl In Minnesota
Whoa! She sure told her! Attitude really comes through. Funny, yet powerful. The rhyming adds a lot. It was fun to read and I enjoyed looking back and forth from the writing to the photo.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
|
Whoa! She sure told her! Attitude really comes through. Funny, yet powerful. The rhyming adds a lot. It was fun to read and I enjoyed looking back and forth from the writing to the photo.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
-
Thanks so much, I appreciate the read and review.
Closet
Comment from sfharper
Funny. You capture the experience of a rival winning over a player well. Good use for the limerick style. It is very well balanced and easy to read. It also is quite fitting with the sense of being trounced. I like the Stosur, bulldozer, closer rhyme.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
|
Funny. You capture the experience of a rival winning over a player well. Good use for the limerick style. It is very well balanced and easy to read. It also is quite fitting with the sense of being trounced. I like the Stosur, bulldozer, closer rhyme.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
-
Haha, thanks so much for a delightful review. Glad you enjoyed my rhymes.
Cheers closet
Comment from bob cullen
Loved your tribute to Sam, she really is a gutsy performer. As with all your work, it's first class.
One small error in your Author notes. Pat Rafter won the US Open twice in 1997 and 1998. I gather you were referring to women winners.
Love you twisted sense of humour
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
|
Loved your tribute to Sam, she really is a gutsy performer. As with all your work, it's first class.
One small error in your Author notes. Pat Rafter won the US Open twice in 1997 and 1998. I gather you were referring to women winners.
Love you twisted sense of humour
Comment Written 11-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
-
Oh crap! Really? Okay I fix the notes...many thanks Bob, appreciate your delightful review and obviously your sense of humour is indeed as twisted as mine! LOL
Cheers closet x
Comment from The Stranger
well I can well see your excitement at seeing your chosen player defeat the once great Serena, it is a great feeling of euphoria that you describe well
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
|
well I can well see your excitement at seeing your chosen player defeat the once great Serena, it is a great feeling of euphoria that you describe well
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
-
Thanks Stranger, I appreciate it.
Closet xo
Comment from Gungalo
Must be fun, otherwise why do it!!??? Always hated it when they did it in school. Hope she is worth it!! A little fun in the sun eh? Congrats on her win!!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
|
Must be fun, otherwise why do it!!??? Always hated it when they did it in school. Hope she is worth it!! A little fun in the sun eh? Congrats on her win!!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
-
Yep. Have to agree. Thanks for the review.
