Stosur the Dozer
Tongue in Cheek Bouncy Limerick. Tennis Anyone?26 total reviews
Comment from strandregs
Ace: 'Open' door closer! , I bet that flashed through your primordinosorial brain and the rest came tumbling after.
I like shorts with raggy edges , raggy: sweet smile wit evoking pleasure. you might not find it in the dic.Zelick
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Ace: 'Open' door closer! , I bet that flashed through your primordinosorial brain and the rest came tumbling after.
I like shorts with raggy edges , raggy: sweet smile wit evoking pleasure. you might not find it in the dic.Zelick
Comment Written 14-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much, I appreciate your review...Hey i read your poem, it was a good laugh and I will be back to review it shortly...sorry but I didn't have time to do that when I read it.
Cheers closet
Comment from Piggies Grandma
Woo hoo! I'm glad she beat her. I enjoyed reading your limerick, closet. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. Go dozer...lol.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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Woo hoo! I'm glad she beat her. I enjoyed reading your limerick, closet. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. Go dozer...lol.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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I am pretty glad too mate. Cheers and thanks a bunch. Its about time that supersillious smile got wiped right off her face...kinda nice an Aussie did it too! LOL
cheers and thanks a bunch.
Closet xo
Comment from Jean Lutz
I think she has now been blitzed twice! Once by Stosur and now by the Jester. You would think she would learn not to mess with Aussies, but then she is known for making the same mistakes again.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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I think she has now been blitzed twice! Once by Stosur and now by the Jester. You would think she would learn not to mess with Aussies, but then she is known for making the same mistakes again.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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Haha, many thanks Jean and it could well be the case. A great review and sixer to match...Thankyou so much.
Cheers closet.
Comment from Judian James
Oh, and what a GREAT match it was. Serena's big enough to eat Sam for lunch. I was a bit worried she may not have had the power to keep up with our hefty Queen of the courts BUT she did it and I was thrilled for her and Australia. I loved the limerick Clo.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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Oh, and what a GREAT match it was. Serena's big enough to eat Sam for lunch. I was a bit worried she may not have had the power to keep up with our hefty Queen of the courts BUT she did it and I was thrilled for her and Australia. I loved the limerick Clo.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011
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Haha, thanks Jude, I appreciate your delightful review. Most welcomed.
Clo xoxo
Comment from RebelRose
This is a good one. I like the word play in that last line.
Pretty clever. I am not a tennis fan and did not watch it but I have seen enough of the clips on various TV shows to keep up and know what the poem is about. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
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This is a good one. I like the word play in that last line.
Pretty clever. I am not a tennis fan and did not watch it but I have seen enough of the clips on various TV shows to keep up and know what the poem is about. Nicely done.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
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Thanks RR, I appreciate your thoughtful response...I am not a tennis fan either just happened to catch the second half of the match this morning and it was a beauty.
Cheers and thanks for reading and commenting.
Closet xo
Comment from Dougspoetry
Hoo-freaking ray! I like it! I guess congratulations are in order. Nice little ditty about one of your own. Great piece as usual!
God Bless!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
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Hoo-freaking ray! I like it! I guess congratulations are in order. Nice little ditty about one of your own. Great piece as usual!
God Bless!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
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Haha, thanks Douglas. I appreciate your delightful response.
Closet xo
Comment from Minglement
Evein though you're slamming the US (tongue in cheek) I liked your little limeric. I'm used to a 9 and 6, syllable line format so this threw me a little but it works. You didn't post the limerick format, so not sure it's not okay. Anyway, it was fun. :) Marcia
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
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Evein though you're slamming the US (tongue in cheek) I liked your little limeric. I'm used to a 9 and 6, syllable line format so this threw me a little but it works. You didn't post the limerick format, so not sure it's not okay. Anyway, it was fun. :) Marcia
Comment Written 12-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2011
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Haha, I won't tell you what I was gonna say in line 3...I was being mindful of many factors but we Aussies are a proud bunch and have to stick it up the Yanks when we can! The girls havent won since bloody 73. Thanks Marci.
Cheers Phillippa xoxo
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Then it was their turn t win! Marcia :)
Comment from psalmist
A fun limerick and I really like the last line with the double meaning for Open. Nothing wrong with feeling a little pride towards one's countrymen/women. Congrats. Linda
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2011
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A fun limerick and I really like the last line with the double meaning for Open. Nothing wrong with feeling a little pride towards one's countrymen/women. Congrats. Linda
Comment Written 12-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2011
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Hooray...finally, the review I was after. Pride. Thankyou...we haven't won this title for so long, people are clearly jubilated...and proud taboot. Thanks for acknowledging that.
Glad you enjoyed my joke at the end.
Cheers and thanks again Linda...
Closet xo
Comment from gazzagodbod
lol last time a brit won anything it was in black and white and they were wearing long trousers and the ball was a hedgehog ok made the last bit up thanks my friend and well done sammy stoser gazzaxx
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2011
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lol last time a brit won anything it was in black and white and they were wearing long trousers and the ball was a hedgehog ok made the last bit up thanks my friend and well done sammy stoser gazzaxx
Comment Written 12-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2011
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Bahahaha, your funny. Thanks for a great review. Cheers Closet xo
Comment from Ankh
Goody for ol' Stoser....she put the Yanks in their place. No more arrogance now haha. This is nicely thought out and presented. I notice you have a touch of 'humility' in your notes lol :-0~
Seth x
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2011
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Goody for ol' Stoser....she put the Yanks in their place. No more arrogance now haha. This is nicely thought out and presented. I notice you have a touch of 'humility' in your notes lol :-0~
Seth x
Comment Written 12-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2011
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What? Arrogant? Get the fuck out. Really?
Gosh, and I don't even follow the tennis! LOL
I thought Serena was extremely rude and when she squawked before Stosur hit the ball and lost the point and then game...the wheels came off the wagon. She not only abused the umpire twice possibly thrice, but she was too fucking catty to shake her hand.
And I'M arrogant. Hmmmm. I see.
Cheers and thanks for your interesting review. Ha-de-fucking-har!
Closet x
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I meant the yanks have no more arrogance now haha....not you :-)~x
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Oh shit.
Sorry about all that then.
Someone else seemed to think I was a little unfair. I thought you were on the same band wagon.
I apologise.
x
