Paranormal Adventures
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Tempest Stirs"Case Studies of Hauntings
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Comment from IndianaIrish
Wow, Bev, what a wonderful ... and scary ... chapter this is. Really kept my interest. The beginning is awesome and you always close with me wanting to read more.
Karyn :>)
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2011
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Wow, Bev, what a wonderful ... and scary ... chapter this is. Really kept my interest. The beginning is awesome and you always close with me wanting to read more.
Karyn :>)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2011
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Hi, Karyn. Thank you for your continued support for my story. I really appreciate it and your generous review. So glad you liked it! XX Bev
Comment from WilliamDeen
hell." Mike///hell," Mike
This is another great chapter to add to your book. It has very interesting characters, realistic dialogue and it was a thriller!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2011
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hell." Mike///hell," Mike
This is another great chapter to add to your book. It has very interesting characters, realistic dialogue and it was a thriller!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2011
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Thanks, Billy. I really appreciate you catching the spag and, more importently, taking time to read and send along your generous review for my chapter. Kind regards, Bev
Comment from psalmist
This is the first chapter of this story I have read. I don't know if I'll be able to go back and catch up, but I'll try because it piqued my interest. Suspenseful, with strong dialog and characters. Linda
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2011
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This is the first chapter of this story I have read. I don't know if I'll be able to go back and catch up, but I'll try because it piqued my interest. Suspenseful, with strong dialog and characters. Linda
Comment Written 09-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2011
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Hi, Linda. I would suggest the first chapter because it sets the story up...and is one of my favorites LOL. I'm pleased that you stopped by and appreciate your generous and helpful review, my friend. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from robina1978
Very scary and bloody.
Such a pity I did not read the previous ones.
No time for it now.
But hope to get the hang of it soon.
Love this genre.
Well written.
Characters and dialogues realistic for this genre.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2011
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Very scary and bloody.
Such a pity I did not read the previous ones.
No time for it now.
But hope to get the hang of it soon.
Love this genre.
Well written.
Characters and dialogues realistic for this genre.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much for your time and interest, robina. Glad you liked my additional chapter and very much appreciate your generous review! Kind regards, Bev
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welcome Bev, Ine
Comment from Violet Demise
I loved this. I haven't read the previous chapters, but with the background you provided everything was quite clear and it would work great even as a single story.
Very well written, exciting, with some great dialog. Also, I'm in love with supernatural so you got me with that as well. And did I mention that it's very well written? Lol
But seriously, I'm amazed... your lines are so clear. I'm looking forward to learning from you.
Have a blessed evening,
Ivana
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2011
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I loved this. I haven't read the previous chapters, but with the background you provided everything was quite clear and it would work great even as a single story.
Very well written, exciting, with some great dialog. Also, I'm in love with supernatural so you got me with that as well. And did I mention that it's very well written? Lol
But seriously, I'm amazed... your lines are so clear. I'm looking forward to learning from you.
Have a blessed evening,
Ivana
Comment Written 08-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2011
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Hi, Violet. Thank you so much for your awesome and generous review. I really appreciate your insights and encouragement for the chapter. You are really most kind! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Gungalo
Oh boy!! He sounds like he means business!! Right? Very good write my favorite storyteller! It seems as if the crew gets all the luck and has their equipment all locked up.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2011
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Oh boy!! He sounds like he means business!! Right? Very good write my favorite storyteller! It seems as if the crew gets all the luck and has their equipment all locked up.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2011
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Hi, Gungalo. Hey, thanks a bunch for your awesome review. Isn't that the way it goes...no camera and the perfect shot LOL. I really appreciate your generous and supportive review, my friend. Kind regards, Bev
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Smiling at you!!
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Smilin' back, Gungalo!
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Oh yeah ...
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Oh so exciting and scary. If it had of been a movie I would have had my head hiding behind a cushion !
Goosebumps reading this one so I would say you hit your mark. Flowed nicely and I enjoyed your imagery below
"a guttural moan reverberated off the basement walls and built in intensity like ions before a rainstorm."
Well done and a great read...
Thanks for sharing and scaring the crap out of me.
Maureen
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2011
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Oh so exciting and scary. If it had of been a movie I would have had my head hiding behind a cushion !
Goosebumps reading this one so I would say you hit your mark. Flowed nicely and I enjoyed your imagery below
"a guttural moan reverberated off the basement walls and built in intensity like ions before a rainstorm."
Well done and a great read...
Thanks for sharing and scaring the crap out of me.
Maureen
Comment Written 08-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2011
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Hi, Maureen. Thank you for your wonderful review. And your patience!! Glad you liked the chapter...sorry about the goosebumps LOL. Much appreciate you interest and support, my friend. Take care, Bev
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Welcome my friend...I may have to sleep with the light on its already dark here....scardy cat....:)
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I slept with my head under covers until I was married for three years! I guess I used to get visitors, because it's all a blank to me. Occasionally, I still get woken up by something or someone, but not nearly as much as I used to. I just put the Light around me and call in my angels before I go to sleep. Speaking of angels, thanks for your support, dear lady.
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Oh my ...now you've done it...lights on everywhere...that would have scared me to death...wow...and WOW...going to need lots of light and lots of angels....
Hugs
Maureen
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Sorry!!
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LOL...no chocolate for you!!!
Comment from rchitwood
Very well written and I enjoyed reading your story.As I have said before I love reading anything paranormal.Good creative imagination and good dialogue and characters.I would recommend to others. P.S. I bet the sheriff has something going on.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2011
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Very well written and I enjoyed reading your story.As I have said before I love reading anything paranormal.Good creative imagination and good dialogue and characters.I would recommend to others. P.S. I bet the sheriff has something going on.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 08-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2011
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Hiya, Rita. Hey, thank you so much for your absolutely wonderful review. I appreciate your generosity and support for my chapter. Oh, yeah...the sheriff has some 'splainin to do. Blessings to you as well, Bev
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Bev
This chapter really got off to a flying start!
The death of the savage dog was spectacular. I particularly like the image of it trying to bite invisible flesh.
The plot is also nicely developed in this episode. Leaves your readers wanting more.
Ron xox
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2011
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Hi Bev
This chapter really got off to a flying start!
The death of the savage dog was spectacular. I particularly like the image of it trying to bite invisible flesh.
The plot is also nicely developed in this episode. Leaves your readers wanting more.
Ron xox
Comment Written 08-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2011
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I had you in mind when I wrote the opening paragraphs. I literally said to myself, I wonder what Ron would think LOL. Thanks for the inspiration oh horror-meister. I've learned a few tricks thanks to your ongoing generous support and suggestions. You are the best! Bev
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Another great chapter, another try at trying to post my review (maybe it'll go through this time). Well written. I was totally taken back about the "wolfhound"--he really intended to do harm. I hate for the animal to have died but it made for a very interesting read. Jenkins is going to blow his top when he finds out. Anyway, I enjoyed it very much and wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work my friend.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2011
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Another great chapter, another try at trying to post my review (maybe it'll go through this time). Well written. I was totally taken back about the "wolfhound"--he really intended to do harm. I hate for the animal to have died but it made for a very interesting read. Jenkins is going to blow his top when he finds out. Anyway, I enjoyed it very much and wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work my friend.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2011
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I know PT. It's going to upset a few folks. In my defense, animals seem to be particularly prone to being influenced by negative energy. The animal, here, was used as a tool by the evil forces in the house, in a sense was possessed. Sorry it offended you, PT. I'm a dog lover, normally. Thanks again! Bev
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-It didn't. I understand it's a story. I just meant I didn't expect what happened--which is good! I love the chapter and the story.
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Thanks for letting me know that, PT. You're awesome. XX Bev
