Paranormal Adventures
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Tempest Stirs"Case Studies of Hauntings
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great chapter and a fabulous fight scene. I was almost holding my breath reading it. The sadness that filled the air before the entity disappeared - well done. Just one edit - "I also think it's time (to) involve the local sheriff."
Great read.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Great chapter and a fabulous fight scene. I was almost holding my breath reading it. The sadness that filled the air before the entity disappeared - well done. Just one edit - "I also think it's time (to) involve the local sheriff."
Great read.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2015
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Thanks so much, Pearl. I really appreciate your great comments and insights. The six is also very lovely, as well.
I'll make that correction pronto. Good eye!
:) Bev
Comment from c_lucas
Noisy is one thing. Violence is usually not forth coming. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Noisy is one thing. Violence is usually not forth coming. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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The Main (Maine) Paranormal Society.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Thanks for reviewing, Charlie. I appreciate your support and catching that spaggie. :) Bev
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I have twenty to every one of yours, LOL. You're welcome, Bev. Charlie
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:))
Comment from royowen
A most enjoyable and scary episode at the same time, the episode of the confrontation between the wolfhound and the supernatural entity that was in conflict with Bellingham, this will take considerable effort against entity welding this sort of power and influence, how will they be able to deal with these superpowerhouses, well done, Bev. Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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A most enjoyable and scary episode at the same time, the episode of the confrontation between the wolfhound and the supernatural entity that was in conflict with Bellingham, this will take considerable effort against entity welding this sort of power and influence, how will they be able to deal with these superpowerhouses, well done, Bev. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Hi, Roy. Thank you so much for reading my chapter and sending along your encouragement comments. I appreciate both your generosity and support.
:) Bev
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My pleasure Bev
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Very well done chapter. There so many reasons for the intended cover up, especially the one adduced about the sheriff and illegal activities in the estate by Porter and his nephew. I enjoyed reading this chapter.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Very well done chapter. There so many reasons for the intended cover up, especially the one adduced about the sheriff and illegal activities in the estate by Porter and his nephew. I enjoyed reading this chapter.
ola thomas
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Hi, Ola. Thank you so much for this splendid review. I really appreciate you reading my chapter, and your offered insights.
:) Bev
Comment from Joy Graham
I forgot to mention in the last review that I wonder if the contractor can hear the ghosts since they are making a lot of noise???
"the wolfhound flopped(unto)its side" - "onto" me thinks.
Another great chapter :)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012
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I forgot to mention in the last review that I wonder if the contractor can hear the ghosts since they are making a lot of noise???
"the wolfhound flopped(unto)its side" - "onto" me thinks.
Another great chapter :)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2012
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Jim was more involved in the situation than meets the eye. He definitely knew about the ghosts. Xxx Bev
Comment from closetpoetjester
Oooh the plot thickens. Nice work with the rabbid pooch on behalf of the spectral puppeteer. Nicely described and told with convincing dialogue between the characters. Strong plot as always and an entertaining read. Sorry I am so behind on chapters sweety. Great imagery created with the flying pooch across the room and it sounds like NO one is a match for this evil entity.
Cheers on a good write.
Closet xoxo
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2011
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Oooh the plot thickens. Nice work with the rabbid pooch on behalf of the spectral puppeteer. Nicely described and told with convincing dialogue between the characters. Strong plot as always and an entertaining read. Sorry I am so behind on chapters sweety. Great imagery created with the flying pooch across the room and it sounds like NO one is a match for this evil entity.
Cheers on a good write.
Closet xoxo
Comment Written 05-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2011
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I am so thrilled that you found the action in this chapter worked for you, closet. I try to keep it real, while still creeping out my readers lol!! You are so generous and kind to take time out of your day to review my recent postings. I really valuable your always-excellent perspective and insights into the writing and characters. So appreciate you! Love ya, Bev
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No probs sweetie...sorry for the delay...its been a hell couple of weeks and I have had to ditch the longer reads till I could catch up.
LOL
Cheers closet xoxo
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I hope things are looking up for you, closet. All the more reason to thank you! XX Bev
Comment from Bellringer
Bev, Very good paranormal details related in an exciting, edge-of-the-seat manner. Mike demonstrated exceptional courage in the midst of these surreal events. Great twist to the end of this chapter--complicating mattes for the team. Blessings, Hector
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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Bev, Very good paranormal details related in an exciting, edge-of-the-seat manner. Mike demonstrated exceptional courage in the midst of these surreal events. Great twist to the end of this chapter--complicating mattes for the team. Blessings, Hector
Comment Written 11-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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Hi, Hector. Thank you so much! I really appreciate your marvelous and generous review. Thanks for your time AND support. Warest regards, Bev
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You're welcome, Bev. Blessings, Hector
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
Your descriptive tone, the expression was my fav in this story. It goes on to add information about development of plot and characters. very nice, keep writing
best regards
K
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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Your descriptive tone, the expression was my fav in this story. It goes on to add information about development of plot and characters. very nice, keep writing
best regards
K
Comment Written 11-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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Hi, Kashif. This is a great review that gives me something to sink my teetch into, so to speak, when drafting further chapters. A most informative and generous offering. Thank you! Bev
Comment from Tom C. Adams
Great chapter, Bev! I enjoyed the "paranormal dog fight", and the way you framed the "telepathic reply." I will be interested to see in which direction you will head.
UYour usual fine job of proofing and editing. Especially strong dialogue, and the descriptions were well timed and well-thought out. I liked
"Fighting the despair projected by the entity, Mike gripped the plank in his hands. He used the sensation of its rough-cut edges biting into his skin to stay within his own thoughts and sensations."
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"In response, a guttural moan reverberated off the basement walls and built in intensity like ions before a rainstorm. Then the mass compressed into a single line and disappeared."
Looking forward to 13!
Tom C.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2011
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Great chapter, Bev! I enjoyed the "paranormal dog fight", and the way you framed the "telepathic reply." I will be interested to see in which direction you will head.
UYour usual fine job of proofing and editing. Especially strong dialogue, and the descriptions were well timed and well-thought out. I liked
"Fighting the despair projected by the entity, Mike gripped the plank in his hands. He used the sensation of its rough-cut edges biting into his skin to stay within his own thoughts and sensations."
and...
"In response, a guttural moan reverberated off the basement walls and built in intensity like ions before a rainstorm. Then the mass compressed into a single line and disappeared."
Looking forward to 13!
Tom C.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2011
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Hi, Tom C. I so appreciate you taking time to read the chapter and offer your thoughts and support. Got a couple of converging ideas that I plan to offer next time. Comforting to know your coming along for the ride! Kindest regards, Bev
Comment from JW
This was definitely an interesting addition to your story. The scene with the dog was quite graphic. You did a great job creating the imagery. Thanks for sharing this. JW.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2011
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This was definitely an interesting addition to your story. The scene with the dog was quite graphic. You did a great job creating the imagery. Thanks for sharing this. JW.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2011
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Hi, Jonathon! Thanks for taking time to read my chapter. I always appreciate your interest and generosity, my friend. Warm regards, Bev
