Comment from Chris Tee

Average

Sorry I had to abandon the read because this is not in the required format. You will not shape in the contest. This is a three line poem required, but it must have 5 syllables not words in the first line, 7 syllables not words in the second and 5 syllables in the last line
I suggest you post it as general poetry
Let me try to help you.
It is a 5-7-5, Haiku and senryu format, Ok:
Example:
I love you so much = 5 syllables
My love for you is extreme = 7 syllables
Much is love for you = 5 syllables
Three lines only you see
Every = 3 syllables e=1 ve=1 ry=1 total = 3
Now do not give up go and post this as quatrains or edit into 3lines as another poem and keep that one because it is good. Once you have edited it reply to me and I shall re-review it for you. If you do not understand tell me in your reply Ok, I shall try to help you further
Never quit.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2011

thamks so much, i will try

Comment from peggles

Excellent

How very sweet this is
I love poems about pets
They are written with such devotion
The photo is divine
I enjoyed this so much
Well done
Best wishes in the contest

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2011

thanks xxx