Time Does Not Heal All Wounds
Violence hurts emotionally as well as physically.56 total reviews
Comment from Denise S
Your use of the letter f was good. And your message was quite clear. The picture you used was just right. Good job
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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Your use of the letter f was good. And your message was quite clear. The picture you used was just right. Good job
Comment Written 11-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the good review and for enjoying my poem :)
Comment from TammyGail
This was a great poem.....
Each word better than before
I loved the imagery used for this
Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure to read....
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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This was a great poem.....
Each word better than before
I loved the imagery used for this
Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure to read....
Comment Written 11-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from HAWordsmith
A powerful and stirring write; and yes, the blows are felt forever, both mentally and physically; you do well in getting that across here. Excellent alliteration, and the choice of the letter (F) that you use to do so adds to the edge of this piece. A Pleasure to read. Thank you for this posting and many blessings.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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A powerful and stirring write; and yes, the blows are felt forever, both mentally and physically; you do well in getting that across here. Excellent alliteration, and the choice of the letter (F) that you use to do so adds to the edge of this piece. A Pleasure to read. Thank you for this posting and many blessings.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from Lincoln's Black Dog
This what I'm talking about. I love the intense alliteration. The colour scheme is great and the image matches really well with the writing content. Well done on a very good 5/7/5
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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This what I'm talking about. I love the intense alliteration. The colour scheme is great and the image matches really well with the writing content. Well done on a very good 5/7/5
Comment Written 11-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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Thanks! --> "This what I'm talking about" <----- love it! :)
Comment from HighKu
I do believe that emotional or spiritual pain cuts deeper than the physical. Leaving lasting wounds not easily healed. Your poem I believe may allow for some healing by so openly addressing such an unfortunate subject. Your choice of artwork is stunning, haunting and sobering. Perhaps enough to sober one inclined to abuse. Thereby saving their target. An amazing job of conveying so very much in a 5-7-5! All the Best for You in Life and the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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I do believe that emotional or spiritual pain cuts deeper than the physical. Leaving lasting wounds not easily healed. Your poem I believe may allow for some healing by so openly addressing such an unfortunate subject. Your choice of artwork is stunning, haunting and sobering. Perhaps enough to sober one inclined to abuse. Thereby saving their target. An amazing job of conveying so very much in a 5-7-5! All the Best for You in Life and the contest!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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Wow - I never thought of that - that reading this could make someone think twice the next time they raise their hands to someone. Thank you for saying all that you did.
Comment from poetstar
I really agree with your poem, that time does not heal all wounds. I am glad you wrote this poem, so people won't act like you just get over domestic violence or severe child abuse. We try to move on but sometimes the pain just catches up to us. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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I really agree with your poem, that time does not heal all wounds. I am glad you wrote this poem, so people won't act like you just get over domestic violence or severe child abuse. We try to move on but sometimes the pain just catches up to us. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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No one ever fully just 'gets over' being a victim of violence. Thank you for reading and for your review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from donette1914
outstanding! very cleaver, very talented you are a true poet. you are a very skilled writer. very believable. you are very creative to think of it.. great job!!!!
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outstanding! very cleaver, very talented you are a true poet. you are a very skilled writer. very believable. you are very creative to think of it.. great job!!!!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2011
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Thank you very, very much for all of the compliments --- and of course the 6 stars!!!
Comment from steevie
Well done, Megan ... your thoughts are concise and powerful. All the imagery necessary is there to project the intended impact to this well thought out piece of poetry.
steve
My apologies ... I meant to give a five star. I am newly back to FanStory ... have been away for about a year. Please forgive my error
steve
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2011
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Well done, Megan ... your thoughts are concise and powerful. All the imagery necessary is there to project the intended impact to this well thought out piece of poetry.
steve
My apologies ... I meant to give a five star. I am newly back to FanStory ... have been away for about a year. Please forgive my error
steve
Comment Written 10-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind words. Can you please tell me what you think it needs to be improved on, so I can understand why you gave me 4 stars instead of 5.
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you are welcome
steve
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Thank you... I am always open to critism and am always learning. What one person likes another may not. But, thank you :)
Comment from Glasstruth
This is a brilliant 17 syllable poem. The picture is perfect with it. Your description of a foe is excellent!
Three thumbs!!!
Les
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2011
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This is a brilliant 17 syllable poem. The picture is perfect with it. Your description of a foe is excellent!
Three thumbs!!!
Les
Comment Written 10-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2011
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:) Thank you! :)
Comment from LadyCosgrove
...and there it is - The trust that is lost.
A stark realistic view of violence, most poetically portrayed and yet loses none of its impact.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2011
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...and there it is - The trust that is lost.
A stark realistic view of violence, most poetically portrayed and yet loses none of its impact.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much!
