Comment from Polele

Excellent

I enjoyed this...the reading and flow is smooth.
It is an effective 5-7-5 that paints a very familiar
picture...and tells of how facebook has connected the world.

I know you and you know me so hi fanstory fren! {:}}

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2011

Comment from linsbm

Excellent

I find this poem a little mischevous, with a jally touch and emotional appeal to readers. Met with the required syllable count of 5-7-5 poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2011

Thank you for that. I was just on Facebook and saw a FB friend of mine who shared link to FanStory - and just before that was teaching two of my colleagues how to use Facebook - so it was a "facebook" moment. :-)

Comment from Causey

Excellent

This says it all about the facebook business of friends. Almost everyone has a facebook friend they don't have any idea who they are. Yet they are facebook friends. That is what I like about your poem. It is a true defecation of a facebook friend.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2011

Facebook;like many other social networking sites has become an everyday part of life. I for one am facebook-prone!It has its ups and downs and sometimes security settings can never be too secure - but otherwise its the only way to connect with family, friend,foe,client etc etc- and sure does brighten up a dull moment but then again can even dull that bright moment..lol!

reply by Causey on 27-Aug-2011

I agree.

Comment from The Stranger

Excellent

well how do you do, Im on facebook too
I have known new people from new lands
We have not me yet, face to face,
As they all are scattered from place to place...

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2011

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2011

The world was once far
separated by the seas
internet unites!