Warrior Angel
My father fights for me34 total reviews
Comment from WilliamDeen
Dr. Schulz," He spoke /// He should be lower case he
And she's in teacher program/// And she's in the teacher program
add the word the
GREAT inspirational story! YOU go DAD! I can't believe he ever even said anything to you!!! How Absurd... and Ignorant...
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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Dr. Schulz," He spoke /// He should be lower case he
And she's in teacher program/// And she's in the teacher program
add the word the
GREAT inspirational story! YOU go DAD! I can't believe he ever even said anything to you!!! How Absurd... and Ignorant...
Comment Written 21-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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Thanks for noting the typos. I just corrected them. I went over the preview twice and didn't catch that. Love ya.
Comment from poetstar
Well, this was just such a fantastic story. I have seen many with lazy eye, and it was never a problem or distraction for me. I am glad you had your eye corrected when you wanted it done, not when society pressured you to do it. Furthermore, you sure have one great and wonderful dad. It is so good for you to honor him this way with your fine writing.
Very Sincerely Poet Star
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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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Well, this was just such a fantastic story. I have seen many with lazy eye, and it was never a problem or distraction for me. I am glad you had your eye corrected when you wanted it done, not when society pressured you to do it. Furthermore, you sure have one great and wonderful dad. It is so good for you to honor him this way with your fine writing.
Very Sincerely Poet Star
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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Thank you poetstar. It would be nice to win the contest.
Comment from barfy
That's cos you're a Spitty... is this real? Did this happen? Cos you write it like it must've... I almost wish I wasn't a fan... So I could become one... All over again. X
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That's cos you're a Spitty... is this real? Did this happen? Cos you write it like it must've... I almost wish I wasn't a fan... So I could become one... All over again. X
Comment Written 21-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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God, I miss reading your pieces. See all the film exerpts tho. Creepy. Thanks oddles for the six stars. It's a contest entry for non-fiction. Yes, definitely biographical and a very hurtful day except for the outcome. XXX
Comment from Osiek
I like the idea of a father standing up for his daughter! This is a wonderful story!
The conflict was there. A hero was in the making...
I like your author's notes. I am glad you had your eye straightened. This world can push us down at times. It is when we have all the confidence within that we can push back.
Thank you for sharing your story.
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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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I like the idea of a father standing up for his daughter! This is a wonderful story!
The conflict was there. A hero was in the making...
I like your author's notes. I am glad you had your eye straightened. This world can push us down at times. It is when we have all the confidence within that we can push back.
Thank you for sharing your story.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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glad you liked.
