Practical Joke
A witty Senryu about selfishness3 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
This is funny and sad at the same time. A nicely told little story. I wondered if the last line, "How they love themselves" should end with an exclamation. It seemed so to me, but not sure. You've managed to say a lot with your clever fifteen words.
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This is funny and sad at the same time. A nicely told little story. I wondered if the last line, "How they love themselves" should end with an exclamation. It seemed so to me, but not sure. You've managed to say a lot with your clever fifteen words.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2011
Comment from krystie
Cute, cute little joke. It made me chuckle. Love the fun feeling like, a "happy go lucky".
Would love to see a photograph with this, perhaps monkeys?
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Cute, cute little joke. It made me chuckle. Love the fun feeling like, a "happy go lucky".
Would love to see a photograph with this, perhaps monkeys?
Comment Written 01-Aug-2011
Comment from TJ Starbuck
Cute! Very good 5/7/5 formatting. I love the 2nd line about Yes! I love me. I think this is well done and amusing. I wish you well with the contest.
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Cute! Very good 5/7/5 formatting. I love the 2nd line about Yes! I love me. I think this is well done and amusing. I wish you well with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2011
