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Rhyming Mirror Nonet16 total reviews
Comment from robina1978
I found your poem really great.
Flows well and rhymes well(not forced)
No comments on structure.
Easy to read and about something most of us need sometimes.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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I found your poem really great.
Flows well and rhymes well(not forced)
No comments on structure.
Easy to read and about something most of us need sometimes.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind review!!! Debbie
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most welcome
Comment from adewpearl
Your syllable count and structure is perfect for the mirror nonet. I like how some lines that mirror are identical and others are just parallel, so that nothing sounds forced, and I really like the thoughtful description you provide of your wished-for special place. Brooke
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Your syllable count and structure is perfect for the mirror nonet. I like how some lines that mirror are identical and others are just parallel, so that nothing sounds forced, and I really like the thoughtful description you provide of your wished-for special place. Brooke
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much Brooke!!! Debbie
Comment from Maureen's Pen
I was completely caught off guard with this one. It was beyond stunning. It pulled me into your words, and somehow I felt connected as if requesting my own hideaway.
I loved the Nonets ability to mirror back, and that may be why I am sitting here going "wow".
But I think too, the emotion buried within this pieces awakens the part of me that is fanciful, a dreamer....
Yes excellence and beauty you have captured with this one.
I loved it, and thoroughly enjoyed my time with it this morning.
Well done.
Maureen
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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I was completely caught off guard with this one. It was beyond stunning. It pulled me into your words, and somehow I felt connected as if requesting my own hideaway.
I loved the Nonets ability to mirror back, and that may be why I am sitting here going "wow".
But I think too, the emotion buried within this pieces awakens the part of me that is fanciful, a dreamer....
Yes excellence and beauty you have captured with this one.
I loved it, and thoroughly enjoyed my time with it this morning.
Well done.
Maureen
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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I am so glad you enjoyed it!!! Now that I am disabled, someone knows where I am at all times. I miss being spontaneous and being able to do my own thing~Debbie
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Maybe I understand this so well becuase I too am disabled and feel exactly as you described in your reply...all I can say is mee too!
Maureen
Comment from peggles
Your poem are so well written, your emotions, ideas, thoughts well expressed and put together in a beautiful tone and style
I enjoyed this poem and thought the photo fitted so very well
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Your poem are so well written, your emotions, ideas, thoughts well expressed and put together in a beautiful tone and style
I enjoyed this poem and thought the photo fitted so very well
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind review!!! Debbie
Comment from Denise S
I just wished you had said " while centring on my goal instead. But good work, rreally good flow, the words chosen to describe the mood were just perfect.
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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I just wished you had said " while centring on my goal instead. But good work, rreally good flow, the words chosen to describe the mood were just perfect.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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That is a suggestion I will look at. Thanks
Comment from Magics02
The bloom picture is awesome and so is your write. I have my hideaway too. I guess we all need that space we call our own to go to and everyday for sure. I love everything about this write. Fantastic!!
Blessings
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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The bloom picture is awesome and so is your write. I have my hideaway too. I guess we all need that space we call our own to go to and everyday for sure. I love everything about this write. Fantastic!!
Blessings
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much for the kind words and review!!! Debbie
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Always you are welcome
