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Rhyming Mirror Nonet16 total reviews
Comment from sasil
What a perfect pic of this lilly! I can see you really enjoyed your visit to the garden. I hope to see more photos.
I quite enjoyed the mirroring nonets you've stacked here. The wistful tone and lament is one I'm sure echoes for many a reader. Well presented poetry and photography--S.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2011
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What a perfect pic of this lilly! I can see you really enjoyed your visit to the garden. I hope to see more photos.
I quite enjoyed the mirroring nonets you've stacked here. The wistful tone and lament is one I'm sure echoes for many a reader. Well presented poetry and photography--S.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2011
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I am going to give myself a year's membership to the gardens as my birthday present to myself-then I can go anytime I want to!!! Debbie
Comment from Janie King
We all long for a secret place where we can take our thoughts, talk with God and try to allow ourselves time to regroup so that we can march on. This is nicely written and reads smoothly. Good job. God bless.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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We all long for a secret place where we can take our thoughts, talk with God and try to allow ourselves time to regroup so that we can march on. This is nicely written and reads smoothly. Good job. God bless.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review!!! Debbie
Comment from rchitwood
Very good poem and I enjoyed reading it,I really like the structure very creative. Good emotional images and line flow. Your photo compliments your poem.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Very good poem and I enjoyed reading it,I really like the structure very creative. Good emotional images and line flow. Your photo compliments your poem.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much for the kind review!!! Debbie
Comment from deb552
I enjoyed the read very much and wish I had the kind of place you're talking about. I think your form is very clever and it has a perfect flow to it. The syllables counts are just as they should be. It's a fun read. You are getting quite good at using your own photos. The flower is beautiful! deb
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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I enjoyed the read very much and wish I had the kind of place you're talking about. I think your form is very clever and it has a perfect flow to it. The syllables counts are just as they should be. It's a fun read. You are getting quite good at using your own photos. The flower is beautiful! deb
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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When I was working, I would periodically just take a couple days and spend them at a hotel with a pool and relax. Can't afford it now. LOL! Thanks for reviewing!!! Take care, Debbie
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When my ex and I sold our house, we split the money and he bought a condo, me this house. We'd had a pool and I wanted to build one here. He made it sound as though he'd split the cost with me, I had some money of my own from an investment, and w/my ex's help, I figured why not. But, I didn't realize 'til after the fact that he wasn't helping out. Oh well, an expensive venture, but it's nice having it and my son's appreciate. My older son's dog LOVES to swim. So, this is my vacation spot...LOL!
Comment from koneart
I really like this. Sorry I haven't been around. Retired, you know--busy. I'll have to send you a personal message. It's been a lot of fun!
I had two secret places when I was a child--one: hidden in the walls of my room. I'm fairly sure people 'knew' where I was, but were too lazy to grab at me. And two: in the arms of the cedars that grew in our front yard.
Well written--ya did good girl....Kone
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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I really like this. Sorry I haven't been around. Retired, you know--busy. I'll have to send you a personal message. It's been a lot of fun!
I had two secret places when I was a child--one: hidden in the walls of my room. I'm fairly sure people 'knew' where I was, but were too lazy to grab at me. And two: in the arms of the cedars that grew in our front yard.
Well written--ya did good girl....Kone
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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Thank you so very much!!! None of us are perfect at it, but I think most people do there best. I am fortunate to belong to a support group where this is truly the kind of relationships we have and feel that way about many I have meet here on FS too. I have found so many warm and supportive writer's here!!! Debbie
Comment from Piggies Grandma
This is a very cleverly written poem dejohnsrld. I enjoyed reading it very much. It is well thought out and it flows along nicely. What a beautiful flower.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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This is a very cleverly written poem dejohnsrld. I enjoyed reading it very much. It is well thought out and it flows along nicely. What a beautiful flower.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your review!!! Debbie
Comment from barkingdog
This form is interesting in the shape that it takes on the page.
Like an hour glass.
It read well and I like the sentiment of wanting a quiet place to renew yourself when you're low.
You use good alliteration and consonance:
-special/secret/spend/place/peacefully/space
the 's' sound is actually in all of these words!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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This form is interesting in the shape that it takes on the page.
Like an hour glass.
It read well and I like the sentiment of wanting a quiet place to renew yourself when you're low.
You use good alliteration and consonance:
-special/secret/spend/place/peacefully/space
the 's' sound is actually in all of these words!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011
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When I was working, I would periodically just take a couple days and spend them at a hotel with a pool and relax. Can't afford it now. LOL! Thanks for reviewing!!! Take care, Debbie
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Wow. That's a good idea.:)
Comment from Bellringer
Debbie, kudos for attempting a mirror nonet. Your message is clear. Both nonets express a desire for peaceful solitude where one can rejuvenate the soul. The first shows a troubled soul, the second shows the process of "centering." Blessings, Hector
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Debbie, kudos for attempting a mirror nonet. Your message is clear. Both nonets express a desire for peaceful solitude where one can rejuvenate the soul. The first shows a troubled soul, the second shows the process of "centering." Blessings, Hector
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much-I was feeling like trying something and didn't have my poetry books with me, so I created this. Take care!!! DEbbie
Comment from writerwish
Beautifuly written. Everyone should have their own special place. There are severl spots I go to so I can meditate. Rejuvite my soul with centering as my goal says alot. Thanks for sharing this insightful poem.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Beautifuly written. Everyone should have their own special place. There are severl spots I go to so I can meditate. Rejuvite my soul with centering as my goal says alot. Thanks for sharing this insightful poem.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind review!!! Debbie
Comment from Dutchie
This poem is so beautiful, it has a beautiful flow, and so true we all need a place where we can retire to come in harmony again.Such a peaceful thought. Thanks for sharing this
wonderful poem. Fia
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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This poem is so beautiful, it has a beautiful flow, and so true we all need a place where we can retire to come in harmony again.Such a peaceful thought. Thanks for sharing this
wonderful poem. Fia
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind review!!! Debbie
