aabb a poem fur u
Scottish vernacular Quatrain.16 total reviews
Comment from Diny
Each poet's soul must sing it's own tune-
I respect your brouge and style. As a hillbilly from Missouri- I must say I like a write in dialect now and again! You are indeed a fine writer and this is a fitting tribute to those here- Write on! and good luck!- Diny
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Each poet's soul must sing it's own tune-
I respect your brouge and style. As a hillbilly from Missouri- I must say I like a write in dialect now and again! You are indeed a fine writer and this is a fitting tribute to those here- Write on! and good luck!- Diny
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Superb! This is a wonderful poem, my friend, and it's a real hoot to boot! You did an amazing job of playfully paying tribute to the Fan Story's clan. Thanks for counting me in. I totally enjoyed it. You are one extremely talented auld yin. Keep those grand quatrains coming! I hope it wins. Warm regards, W ^-^
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2011
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Superb! This is a wonderful poem, my friend, and it's a real hoot to boot! You did an amazing job of playfully paying tribute to the Fan Story's clan. Thanks for counting me in. I totally enjoyed it. You are one extremely talented auld yin. Keep those grand quatrains coming! I hope it wins. Warm regards, W ^-^
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2011
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Ta Bonny lass fur yer great review and all your encouragement.
The Auld Yin.
Comment from judy corcoran
'peggles a canny furget tae mention,
like me she's oan the blidy Auld Age pension'
lol - she's going to love you for telling the world that alex xx
what an excellent write old'un - such a lovely tribute, i had a smile on my face the whole time teading it - and it is still there :))
very enjoyable - best of luck in the contest
love judy
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'peggles a canny furget tae mention,
like me she's oan the blidy Auld Age pension'
lol - she's going to love you for telling the world that alex xx
what an excellent write old'un - such a lovely tribute, i had a smile on my face the whole time teading it - and it is still there :))
very enjoyable - best of luck in the contest
love judy
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
Comment from Espresso momma
Well, this was grand and a good way to get us all to put in a vote for you too. Ahhh, you are the best anyways my friend. This one is no differant. Great job!
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Well, this was grand and a good way to get us all to put in a vote for you too. Ahhh, you are the best anyways my friend. This one is no differant. Great job!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
Comment from l.raven
OH Alex,This took a lot of thought.Thank You from the bottom of my heart for putting me in your poem.What an honor.Has a great flow,and I love the rhythm and the rhyme.And what a picture.How great this poem is.I hope you win the contest.I love the way you described everyone.And don't worry what others say.It's refreshing to read your poems.I can read English anyday.A change is always welcome.What a wonderful poem to honor your poet friends.Keep them coming.Linda xxoo
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OH Alex,This took a lot of thought.Thank You from the bottom of my heart for putting me in your poem.What an honor.Has a great flow,and I love the rhythm and the rhyme.And what a picture.How great this poem is.I hope you win the contest.I love the way you described everyone.And don't worry what others say.It's refreshing to read your poems.I can read English anyday.A change is always welcome.What a wonderful poem to honor your poet friends.Keep them coming.Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
Comment from stanishmichelle
I was enjoying the entertaining poem and laughing when I came upon my name. That thrilled me even more. I love the humour which is evident throughout the poem, and think this is the most original poem I've seen so far. Very clever writing and an excellent contest entry. You have written about some of my favorite poets too. Always keep me smiling Ye Auld Yin. xxx Michelle
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I was enjoying the entertaining poem and laughing when I came upon my name. That thrilled me even more. I love the humour which is evident throughout the poem, and think this is the most original poem I've seen so far. Very clever writing and an excellent contest entry. You have written about some of my favorite poets too. Always keep me smiling Ye Auld Yin. xxx Michelle
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
Comment from God's Writer
A wonderful poem Alex. Quite long Frey of names. Got quite a school of poets and writers. Thank you for the guidance I have received being your fan. I am richer for the experience.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2011
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A wonderful poem Alex. Quite long Frey of names. Got quite a school of poets and writers. Thank you for the guidance I have received being your fan. I am richer for the experience.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2011
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Jings Bonny lad I thank you for this brammer review. I am very happy I can bring you a wee bit o' pleasure.
The Auld Yin.
Comment from words
I thoroughly enjoyed your reading of your latest contest entry.
I had a grin on my face from you opening lines ... I was honored to be mentioned in your charming verse.
Love your dialect ... you always give a grin ... and a grin is always welcomed.
Good luck in the contest. Hugs,
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I thoroughly enjoyed your reading of your latest contest entry.
I had a grin on my face from you opening lines ... I was honored to be mentioned in your charming verse.
Love your dialect ... you always give a grin ... and a grin is always welcomed.
Good luck in the contest. Hugs,
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
My goodness, Alex, it
must have taken you an
age to get this to flow
with the list of names
you've included...
how clever is this!!
I'm flattered by a mention, my friend - thank you..
and good luck with the contest.
Margaret
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My goodness, Alex, it
must have taken you an
age to get this to flow
with the list of names
you've included...
how clever is this!!
I'm flattered by a mention, my friend - thank you..
and good luck with the contest.
Margaret
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
Comment from Piggies Grandma
I loved your poem Alex it was brilliant. Are there really that many people on Fanstory? I'm so proud you wrote my name in your poem, I'm famous ... lol. I really did think your poem was very cleverly written and well thought out. Good luck with the contest.
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I loved your poem Alex it was brilliant. Are there really that many people on Fanstory? I'm so proud you wrote my name in your poem, I'm famous ... lol. I really did think your poem was very cleverly written and well thought out. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2011
