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Poems of Love and Spirit

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This book is about love, God's Love most of all.

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written spiritual poem. We have a daily battle to fight te evil forces that work together to take us away from God's love and light and make us miserable people hiding in the dark.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
    Thank you so much for your wonerful and heatfelt review. It really lifted my spirit to read it.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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This is a wonderfully penned poem on the fighting the grim powers unknown, my friend. I wish you health and happiness:)) ~Kerry

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
    Thank you so much for your wonderful and helpful review, it was a joy to read.
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 21-Nov-2017
    Your very welcome:)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks how man can overpower evil power and darkness or distrust, the key to win the battle is easy by ensuring faith and confidence of outcome or effect out of faith as it happens in all cases; I liked.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
    Thank you for your encouraging and helpful review, It was a wonderful write how you perceived the message.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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This is a lovely spiritual poem and the picture is a perfect match.
Well written, well rhymed, the message is strong and clear.
Well done.
Sharon

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2017
    Thank you so much for your encouraging review, it is very helpful.

Comment from rchitwood
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Very good poem and I imagine sickness can cause very painful battles.Your Faith is very good as to who won this battle. Very strong images and structure also believable.Very smooth line flow and your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2012
    Thank you Rihitwood for your very informative and helpful review to my poem. Sorry for my late reply. Was not very well. With kindness, Sarah
Comment from KinaSalad
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Hi there Sarahice, from Iceland, I enjoyed reading your poem here. Yes, spiritual battles are real and you need faith to overcome them. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
    Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from rashi kumar
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Great that you think positively about it,
when we have faith in God, it will be alright.
A very well-written and beautifully presented poem,
good rhyme and rhythm!

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
    Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from oNray
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A poem with a positive mindset not a negative reminding us of the battles we face and we need not face them alone. As we have strength in God

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
    This is the truth, "we need to face them alone," in God's power and strength with real faith! I love the battles they teach me to win to victory. Thank you for your great and wonderful review. With great fulness, Sarah
Comment from ernesto escarro
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The Battle Grim

In the presence of the key,
you should think of its importance
to wherever you go you need this.

The Lord is your light fir the destiny that
you are going to reach.

Winning the mighty battle grim, strengthened with the
heaven's power
you will overcome the evil power.
So you dwell forever more.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2011


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
    Wonderful and inspiring review! Thank you so much for your kind words. Sarah
reply by ernesto escarro on 26-Nov-2011
    Thanks. God bless.
Comment from Deepakurup
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'The Battle Grim' by Sarahice is an inspiring poem.The author very rhythmically reveals the universal truth that faith and faith only can make us the real winners in the ocean of life full of challenges.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2011


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2011
    Thank you for your great and inspiring review! It is very helpful. Sarah