Summer Fun
Having fun in Summer time2 total reviews
Comment from avadakedavra!
you are sure right man.
I love coke. especially in the hot weather.
You are a great writer keep writing
and you will be great some day.
I also like how you wrote the first two lines rhyming.
five stars man!!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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you are sure right man.
I love coke. especially in the hot weather.
You are a great writer keep writing
and you will be great some day.
I also like how you wrote the first two lines rhyming.
five stars man!!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much! btw, Im not a man. lol
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sorry, your poem was very poetic though
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its okie. ^_^v thanks
Comment from MizKat
yuicakes - Your 5-75 poem is short, sweet, and to
the point. I suppose this is fun in the summer for
some, although I'd rather atay indoors by the AC at my age. :) Kat
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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yuicakes - Your 5-75 poem is short, sweet, and to
the point. I suppose this is fun in the summer for
some, although I'd rather atay indoors by the AC at my age. :) Kat
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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hahah Thanks MizKat .Im new here, I just registered an hour ago. I cant think of any tho, lol. I hope people will like it. Thanks.
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Welcome - I know you'll have fun here and make a lot of friends. I'm sure people will like your poem. I did. Kat
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Thanks MizKat. Thanks so much. hugs*
