My Book of Favored Sonnets
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "A Silent Dawning"My collection of various sonnets.
32 total reviews
Comment from Bryana
Beautifully written sonnet my friend, it is certainly a pleasure to read your work. I specially love this stanza...
You'll hear it in the whisp'ring willow tree
Inhale it through the fresh, sweet fallen dew.
This ambiance will set a spirit free;
it calls for us to start this walk anew.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2011
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Beautifully written sonnet my friend, it is certainly a pleasure to read your work. I specially love this stanza...
You'll hear it in the whisp'ring willow tree
Inhale it through the fresh, sweet fallen dew.
This ambiance will set a spirit free;
it calls for us to start this walk anew.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much Bryana, you always have such sweet and thoughtful words.
Comment from KeishaAlexandra
this is a beautiful poem, the first part helps paint the image of the dawn arising.
i like how you have stated that with a new dawn the day is fresh not only with dew and the air but with things to do and experience.
i very much enjoyed reading this. its a very tranquil poem =]
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2011
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this is a beautiful poem, the first part helps paint the image of the dawn arising.
i like how you have stated that with a new dawn the day is fresh not only with dew and the air but with things to do and experience.
i very much enjoyed reading this. its a very tranquil poem =]
Comment Written 12-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much for the beautiful words of review and for the extra gift of stars, it is very much appreciated.
Comment from Jen Gentry
methinks you have a fine write here I enjoyed and even though it has an old flavor to it It does seem original and fresh very well done
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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methinks you have a fine write here I enjoyed and even though it has an old flavor to it It does seem original and fresh very well done
Comment Written 12-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Lois Delaney
I thought you did a splendid job writing this sonnet, Dawn. I find sonnets a bit difficult to review. They have a story inside somehow, and I'm not really sure what to look for. But it all worked for me.
I wish you the best in the contest. It seems more difficult than I used to think. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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I thought you did a splendid job writing this sonnet, Dawn. I find sonnets a bit difficult to review. They have a story inside somehow, and I'm not really sure what to look for. But it all worked for me.
I wish you the best in the contest. It seems more difficult than I used to think. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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yeah they are a bit tricky, takes a bit to understand them for sure. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from judiverse
Dawn, a beautiful sonnet. Like the title. It reads so smoothly. "Warming glow" is a nice phrase, and the poem reflects the peace you mention in the last stanza. The idea of being on a journey is quite appropriate to your poem. judiverse
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Dawn, a beautiful sonnet. Like the title. It reads so smoothly. "Warming glow" is a nice phrase, and the poem reflects the peace you mention in the last stanza. The idea of being on a journey is quite appropriate to your poem. judiverse
Comment Written 12-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from egmosley
Dawn,
You have written a very tight sonnet. The picture is very symbolic of what your poem states. God's presence is just as you have written it. I've felt it. The peace in the dawn of a new day is really worth noting and you have done a suberb job in portraying it. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Dawn,
You have written a very tight sonnet. The picture is very symbolic of what your poem states. God's presence is just as you have written it. I've felt it. The peace in the dawn of a new day is really worth noting and you have done a suberb job in portraying it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from rchitwood
Very spiritual and so creative and I really enjoyed reading this.Your poem has good structure and the lines flow well one line to the next line.Your photo compliments your poem.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Very spiritual and so creative and I really enjoyed reading this.Your poem has good structure and the lines flow well one line to the next line.Your photo compliments your poem.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 12-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from chita
Your author notes are superb-you have a good flow with your Sonnet and rhyme well-your artwork compliments your poem and you write about nature so beautifully-I like where you write(So let this comfort wrap itself around) and go on a journey unknown--a well penned write-great job.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Your author notes are superb-you have a good flow with your Sonnet and rhyme well-your artwork compliments your poem and you write about nature so beautifully-I like where you write(So let this comfort wrap itself around) and go on a journey unknown--a well penned write-great job.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from ByGodsHand1018
You wrote a beautiful poem and it's nice to be reminded that everyday is a new beginning to set your life right. Good luck in the contest and I hope you win!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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You wrote a beautiful poem and it's nice to be reminded that everyday is a new beginning to set your life right. Good luck in the contest and I hope you win!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Janie King
I don't have a clue what Shakespear would do but this is well-writtne and has a nice flow about it. It paints a very colorful picture in your readers mind. God bless.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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I don't have a clue what Shakespear would do but this is well-writtne and has a nice flow about it. It paints a very colorful picture in your readers mind. God bless.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much and God bless you as well.
