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The Blank Page

a tribute to heroic writers

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Comment from livingwords
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This is such an honest and realistic post that gets to the heart of zfaStory. It should be a prerequisite read for all who join. Thank you for the thoughts behind each word and phrase. Six owed. Dan :))

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2011
    you continue to entertain me and humble me....glad you got a peek at my admiration.
reply by livingwords on 09-Jul-2011
    Remember Stop and Smell the Deoderizer? I took some heat from that, but lots liked it. Hope it didn't embarrass you. Dan :))
Comment from The Stranger
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Well first let me say how honored and humbled I feel to be mentioned on a list that includes Judian James and Brooke (Adewpearl)
I started writing in March 2009 following my reluctant acceptance that I was told by medical experts to retire from full time employment due to Parkinsons disease.
To begin with, I just wrote a few poems that came to mind on Facebook, then after a while I began recieving comments from people on fb who had read them, saying how they enjoyed them.
In April 2010, from out of nowhere (to this day I still cannot account for it) came "The Stranger" and I have never looked back since.
My personal motto is " a wise person is one who knows little but seeks to learn much" and to that end, I always read other peopels work on fanstory to see where I can improve

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2011
    I have responded to your work on site many times. It is only important to understand that we stretch our hands and search for inspiration and truth and your posts have been that part of me that doesn't feel so lonely in my own struggles.
Comment from humpwhistle
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Ingrid, I am moved. You have crystalized a facet of FS that I have been struggling to put my finger on. I do understand what you mean about your Pulitzer Prize---make that your first Pulitzer Prize. I remember that essay. And I remember our (minor, but candid)exchange. I was unaware of the extend to which that piece touched others, but inretrospect I can say I should have known. I have had a similar experience. It is an honor to know an author of your integrity. Thank you, Ingrid.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2011
    I wish we could pop a bottle of wine and hug...hope things are going better with mama
reply by humpwhistle on 09-Jul-2011
    Thanks, Ingrid. Mom's hanging in. Lee
Comment from Belinda
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Hi, Spiritual Echo, you've related what's in my mind about this site, your heroes, and much more. This essay is written frankly, with clarity and zest. I can easily recognize, it comes from the heart. This is great:

Every time a writer pens something that moves me, I realize that out there, somewhere is a person, breathing, that had geography and circumstance been altered, might have been my friend.


 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2011
    you know sometimes they are in the next house.....we don't bother to inquire in our other life.
Comment from Larrypic11
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I am absolutely blown away by the simple eloquence of this pieces. phrasing like, "Three, the people I have never, may never meet, who have willingly walked into my head space and allowed me to linger between their words." captures the fullness of meaning beyond the mere statement. You have others equally inspired in there as well. Thanks for sharing your heart and best of luck in the contest. Larry

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2011
    and thank you for responding with such a generous acknowledgement and vulnerable heart.
Comment from WilliamDeen
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And behind every tragedy is a hero. Your writing is very thought provoking.
Thanks so much for giving me a reason to step back, take a pause and ponder on this writing. Billy

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2011
    Sometimes its even more effective to throw it on the screen, but toss your ego in and wait to see how it tastes the next morning.
Comment from adewpearl
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edited our kids' essays - add apostrophe for plural possessive
Kids leave, diplomas in hand, - add second comma
Your essay is most thoughtful in observations and written in an engaging narrative voice, my friend. Thank you for your mention of me in your author's notes :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2011
    And haven't you always been my morning inspiration and most honourable spag queen? You've helped me.
reply by adewpearl on 08-Jul-2011
    :-)
Comment from sailaway7289
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I also have many heros writers and enjoy walking along with them as they refine their stories. Nice entry! It sounds like you are Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2011
    stay with them. your friendship and loyalty will be remembered long after they go out of print.
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
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Wow you said a lot,that many of us could not find the words to say.What a wonderful tribute to your heroes and to this fantastic sight. It really is a great place to learn ,to be entertained,and to meet some pretty wonderful people. Your piece is beautifully articulated,and the reader can perceive it comes from the heart. Very well done.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2011
    and many tear that were shared.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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You have some powerful heros listed. Sasha is a great hero. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. It was well written and thought out. Good luck.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2011
    isn't she though? thanks for the read.