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Pappa's Memories and Ramblings

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Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings

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Comment from Jean Lutz
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Powerful writing. I find it interesting how natural disasters are now threatening potential man-made disasters. First it was in Japan. Now here in the U.S. wildfires threaten a nuclear plant in New Mexico and flooding another in the northern part of the U.S. Perhaps the Lord is trying to put us on high alert.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2011
    Thank you - I would called it "natures revenge" for Mankind's abuseand destruction
Comment from Kingsland
Exceptional
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If I could award ten stars for this masterpiece. It wouldn't be enough. The word needs positive thought transference like this. I just wonder if you admire john Lennon and the positive avenues in which he thought. Because this his part of his philosophy. It should be the philosophy of this entire Planet We call Earth. You are a very talented writer, because this piece is superbly written in every way. This is the poetic art at their ultimate best... John

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
    Thank you - and Yes, I am a big John Lennon Fan
Comment from Ure Connection
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A very apt word in any generation thanks to the weapons of mass destruction now available to even the smallest of countries.

Is there supposed to be question marks the way through as they seem to be statements as opposed to questions.

Over all I support the prayer at each end.

Thank you for sharing.
Aaron

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
    Thank you - I was hoping the question marks would lead the reader to question the wisdom of buying/making weapons of destruction while having children starving in the streets throughout the world