An aspiring soul
Living d dreams3 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
I love your use of slang,and your personal style. While at the same time fulfilling the required field of a 5-7-5. You abided by the strict structure and yet spoke your thoughts,in a very plain manner.Very well spoken and written down. Good luck with the entry.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2011
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I love your use of slang,and your personal style. While at the same time fulfilling the required field of a 5-7-5. You abided by the strict structure and yet spoke your thoughts,in a very plain manner.Very well spoken and written down. Good luck with the entry.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2011
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thanks ..bt i disagree you at a point ..no slang is used really!
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ok my mistake.
Comment from Daniel Dean Young
This is a very interesting poem.First asking if the reader
Wants to be successful and jump at any chance to do so.
Then for a twist, what if success means you wont fit in?
Good work. Thanks for sharing.
dy
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2011
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This is a very interesting poem.First asking if the reader
Wants to be successful and jump at any chance to do so.
Then for a twist, what if success means you wont fit in?
Good work. Thanks for sharing.
dy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2011
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thanks @ dirtbrider69
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I liked the idea of this one but not sure about the slang or numbers not spelled out. The message is clear and distinct. Good luck in your contest. well done. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2011
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I liked the idea of this one but not sure about the slang or numbers not spelled out. The message is clear and distinct. Good luck in your contest. well done. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 22-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2011
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thnks kiwi:))
