Comment from Scissor handz

Excellent

Here instead of groping, let me give you some coordinates. 102 degrees 34 minutes W longitude, 34 degrees N, ha ha.....
This was a good one. Keep writing. Give me something to review.

Scissor

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2004

Comment from Debora8

Excellent

Beautiful.. I could sit and listen to poetry read to me while feeding me grapes and fanning the hot breeze off me.......All Day...Poetry as good as this deserves time to be appreciated....Right. it had flow and rythm.. its a great write...

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2004

Comment from amaranthblue

Excellent

Beautiful. I loved the images in this, the thoughts and emotions swirled together. The clever slant rhyme of trees and believes work perfectly together...

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2004

Comment from mike1968

Excellent

Wonderful and beautifully written. The poem flows from one verse to the next. Very descriptive and colorful writing. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2004

Comment from jonjo

Excellent

This is such a revealing poem of loss, sadness, desperation then movingt and blending into hope anticipation and self-belief of the future. A lovely read.
Thanks.
jj

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2004

Comment from wyln3

Excellent

Why do you think you will never find your love when your mind is always in make-believe? She's out there somewhere.
Very nice poem too, by the way. :)

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2004

Comment from Lainee

Excellent

Lol. Well you are good, I'll give you that much!

Grant this is another little beauty that carries meaning and meloncholy within your thoughts. It is well structured, well rhymed and tells a good tale. I love it.

Goodluck,
Lainee :)

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2004

Comment from *Always Hope*

Excellent

Wonderful choice of words you have. It does sound personal, just like the last. Very deep.

A tear is drying,
in the centre of my mind.
I'm groping in the distance,
for love that I will find. - you will when you least expect it :)

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2004

Comment from Permelia

Excellent

Your poem is a little wistful, but what I really like about it, is your saying you understand your feelings- and then the hope -expressed
A tear is drying
in the center of my mind,
I'm groping in the distance

and then the positiveness of

for love that I WILL FIND!
Beautiful, as usual.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2004

Comment from Lady Caroline

Excellent

I really like this one. To be honest I hadn't noticed trees and believe until you drew my attention to it in your author's notes but hell yea, it works for me LOL

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2004