Time after time
The clock of life2 total reviews
Comment from gazzagodbod
wow what a piece a time piece in fact loved it flows wonderfully very well written thank you so much for sharing it gazzagodbod
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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wow what a piece a time piece in fact loved it flows wonderfully very well written thank you so much for sharing it gazzagodbod
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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thankyou
Comment from Joyce Crowe
A nice poem. I really like the last s1x lines, that remind us to make the best of our time here. The second verse is a little confusing.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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A nice poem. I really like the last s1x lines, that remind us to make the best of our time here. The second verse is a little confusing.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2011
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Thankyou i appreciate your feed back can you tell me how the 2nd verse is confusing maybe i could explain it
