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Eat Healthy

A poem that tells you not to eat junk food

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Comment from adewpearl
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Your poem is in good 5/7/5 syllable count and structure
You certainly make your point with clarity and conviction while using this form. Brooke

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2011

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
    thankyou
    very
    much
Comment from The Stranger
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hallejulah! a poem that attacks junk food junkies, how true this is and it should take pride of place in every scholl dining area, excellent!

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2011

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
    thanks
Comment from Cumbrianlass
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Nicely done. In keeping with the parameters, and also delivering an important message. Although a little junk, once in a while....... ;)

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2011

reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
    thanks
Comment from miss joyce
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You have some good advice here and I think this would be a good sign for the fridge if you have young children in the house, sneaking out with the sweets! Don't you?

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2011

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
reply by miss joyce on 09-Jun-2011
    My pleasure!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2011
reply by miss joyce on 09-Jun-2011
    I'll check it out!
    But, Easter's past.
    What ever you have can fit in somewhere I'm sure!!!