i
Earth is a genius.2 total reviews
Comment from 7thpoet
Well my fellow writer, your poem although very nicely worded and visual in description has one flaw...you Syllable count is off in the first line by one.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
   |
Well my fellow writer, your poem although very nicely worded and visual in description has one flaw...you Syllable count is off in the first line by one.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
-
Oh, I counted 'idea' as two syllables, I guess it's simply the differences in pronunciation! Thank you!
Comment from Econ Teacher
I find this funny because of the arrogance that comes out with the last line. The brightest idea...then now you are here.
I found this entertaining and witty. I enjoyed this poem. Wait I just went back and read it again. This is my fourth time reading and I might be confused. Is this self deprecating humor? Like great ideas came from the clouds and now I am here, meaning that you weren't a bright idea and that it goes against everything that went before.
Okay, I am just confused about the meaning of this. I thought I understood it, but it is far too deep for me. I guess I didn't come from the light bulbs in the clouds.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
|
I find this funny because of the arrogance that comes out with the last line. The brightest idea...then now you are here.
I found this entertaining and witty. I enjoyed this poem. Wait I just went back and read it again. This is my fourth time reading and I might be confused. Is this self deprecating humor? Like great ideas came from the clouds and now I am here, meaning that you weren't a bright idea and that it goes against everything that went before.
Okay, I am just confused about the meaning of this. I thought I understood it, but it is far too deep for me. I guess I didn't come from the light bulbs in the clouds.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2011
-
aww thanks! Whichever meaning you prefer is the meaning that's right =)
