Adrift
a contest entry about loneliness122 total reviews
Comment from The Stranger
Well I know only too well what you mean, my wife has to endure my mood swings, caused by Parkinsons disease, I think she is wonderful to put up with them personally
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Well I know only too well what you mean, my wife has to endure my mood swings, caused by Parkinsons disease, I think she is wonderful to put up with them personally
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Thanks for taking the time to read & comment on my poem, Adrift.
Have a great week - sherry
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
sherrygreywolf:
Somewhow, even when we know how our loved one's react
to stress, when any of them become distant and withdrawn,
it feels as if they have abandoned us. I think we keep
hoping one day they will trust us enough to let us in
so they don't have to deal with it alone.
thanks for sharing
good luck in the contest
love,
jan
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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sherrygreywolf:
Somewhow, even when we know how our loved one's react
to stress, when any of them become distant and withdrawn,
it feels as if they have abandoned us. I think we keep
hoping one day they will trust us enough to let us in
so they don't have to deal with it alone.
thanks for sharing
good luck in the contest
love,
jan
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Evening, Jan - Thanks for taking the time to read & comment on my poem, Adrift.
Have a great week - sherry
Comment from MyYiaYia
I think this was an emotion that a lot of people can relate to. You caught it exactly as it happens and feels, in a modicum of words. Excellent job! Deb :0)
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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I think this was an emotion that a lot of people can relate to. You caught it exactly as it happens and feels, in a modicum of words. Excellent job! Deb :0)
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Hi Deb - Thanks for taking the time to read & comment on my poem, Adrift.
Have a great week - sherry
Comment from DeboraDyess
Hey sis
Never been paid so well to read such beautifully sad words. Well done. I do like the final draft much better -- well done! Deb
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Hey sis
Never been paid so well to read such beautifully sad words. Well done. I do like the final draft much better -- well done! Deb
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Evening, Deb - Thanks for reading (again!) and taking the time to comment on Adrift. Talk to you later ...
sherry
Comment from carmen vargas
A beautiful tanka poem expressing great sorrow for the loved one no longer wants him as before. Their relationship has cooled. Achieved technical and expressive. Congratulations and good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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A beautiful tanka poem expressing great sorrow for the loved one no longer wants him as before. Their relationship has cooled. Achieved technical and expressive. Congratulations and good luck.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Hi Carmen - Thanks for taking the time to read & critique my poem, Adrift.
Have a great week - sherry
Comment from Janie King
When you love someone what they feel you feel..you become as one..there's nothing much worse than feeling shutout...makes for a real loneliness..it's at those times we sometimes just need to be still and pray..all will come to the surface and as you found it had nothing to do with you..just a job issue. God bless.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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When you love someone what they feel you feel..you become as one..there's nothing much worse than feeling shutout...makes for a real loneliness..it's at those times we sometimes just need to be still and pray..all will come to the surface and as you found it had nothing to do with you..just a job issue. God bless.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Evening, Janie - Thanks for taking the time to read & comment on my poem, Adrift.
Have a great week - sherry
Comment from Gary D. Hardy
Well written poem . Great form and it flows well down the screen. It reminds me of me, I tend to shut down when I'm stressed. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Well written poem . Great form and it flows well down the screen. It reminds me of me, I tend to shut down when I'm stressed. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Evening, Gary - Thanks for taking the time to read & critique my poem, Adrift.
Have a great week - sherry
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It was my pleasure!!!
Comment from missyvamp
Beautiful and descriptive! Most everyone experiences a heartbreak at some time or another, so most everyone should be able to identify with this...
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Beautiful and descriptive! Most everyone experiences a heartbreak at some time or another, so most everyone should be able to identify with this...
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read & comment on my poem, Adrift.
Have a great week - sherry
Comment from 7thpoet
I thought this was a perfect example of how most couples feel just before a divorce or separation. A perfect 5-7-5-7-7 syllable count and a strong poem worth reading
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I thought this was a perfect example of how most couples feel just before a divorce or separation. A perfect 5-7-5-7-7 syllable count and a strong poem worth reading
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read & comment on my poem, Adrift.
Have a great week - sherry
Comment from Jen Gentry
I am so very glad to hear things are fine, I enjoyed this insightful poem and I think it is a really great contest entry good luck
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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I am so very glad to hear things are fine, I enjoyed this insightful poem and I think it is a really great contest entry good luck
Comment Written 07-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2011
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Hi Christa - Thanks for taking the time to read & comment on my poem, Adrift.
Have a great week - sherry
