The Green Singer
Spring has burst into song26 total reviews
Comment from the old guy
Once again you've hit the high note.But, I must add that whatever your original intent with this work, when I read it two things happend. First, being a citizen who grew up in the U.S.A. the word "gay" has taken on a 'new' meaning.
Therefore I had to run my mind back several years to when gay meant happy.And second, my mind,in its present state, had to allow for your meaning of 'singer' not the one that tears at my heart on a daily basis.For, as I have said in the past, there is another who shares my heart wtih my wife of half a century. I must stop hear for my spectacles are begining to fog up with tears. Just please, keep on writing!YOu have such talent!!!!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2011
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Once again you've hit the high note.But, I must add that whatever your original intent with this work, when I read it two things happend. First, being a citizen who grew up in the U.S.A. the word "gay" has taken on a 'new' meaning.
Therefore I had to run my mind back several years to when gay meant happy.And second, my mind,in its present state, had to allow for your meaning of 'singer' not the one that tears at my heart on a daily basis.For, as I have said in the past, there is another who shares my heart wtih my wife of half a century. I must stop hear for my spectacles are begining to fog up with tears. Just please, keep on writing!YOu have such talent!!!!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2011
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Dear Friend, Thank you for reading; romancing Spring was my intent and a gay love is just what it used to mean. I have no time for the word that was adapted for their use. Gay, happy, fun and love, nothing to do with you know what! Bless you both. Love Kay.
Comment from juliaSjames
There is a delightful, ballad-like quality to your write that lifts the hearts of readers. The refrain is enchanting. Marvelous rhyme and steady meter enhance the appeal of your light-hearted salute to spring.
It is wonderful to see the seasons personified as singers in the chorus of life.
Your poem and its explantory notes brought a forgotten memory to mind. Back in the day, I played Spring in a school skit - in a green dress and golden shoes!
Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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There is a delightful, ballad-like quality to your write that lifts the hearts of readers. The refrain is enchanting. Marvelous rhyme and steady meter enhance the appeal of your light-hearted salute to spring.
It is wonderful to see the seasons personified as singers in the chorus of life.
Your poem and its explantory notes brought a forgotten memory to mind. Back in the day, I played Spring in a school skit - in a green dress and golden shoes!
Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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Hi Julia, Thank you so much for your kind review, so pleased that you enjoyed the poem. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Joan E.
Your poem is quite lyrical and could be easily set to music. I enjoyed your repeats and alliteration of "s's" and your personification as you compare Spring to a "singer" and a "player." Well done! -Joan
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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Your poem is quite lyrical and could be easily set to music. I enjoyed your repeats and alliteration of "s's" and your personification as you compare Spring to a "singer" and a "player." Well done! -Joan
Comment Written 01-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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Hi Joan, Thanks so much for your kind review, glad you enjoyed the poem. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from denhagan
This is a nice poem written in the style of eight-line stanzas with good meter and great rhyming throughout the poem. I'm glad someone is finally using "gay" again the way that it used to be used. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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This is a nice poem written in the style of eight-line stanzas with good meter and great rhyming throughout the poem. I'm glad someone is finally using "gay" again the way that it used to be used. Nice poem.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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denhagan, Thanks so much for your kind review, glad you liked the poem and yes, I am adamant about the word 'gay' being used as it should be. The stealing of the word for the purpose of what they use it for, makes me cringe. Blessings, Kay.
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You're welcome. Thanks. Dennis
Comment from Deejharrington
A lovely poem that celebrates springtime. It is like a singer who suddenly one day, bursts into a lovely melody. Full of colors, smells, and sounds. All combined to one beautiful musical season. Very well done.
dj
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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A lovely poem that celebrates springtime. It is like a singer who suddenly one day, bursts into a lovely melody. Full of colors, smells, and sounds. All combined to one beautiful musical season. Very well done.
dj
Comment Written 01-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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Hi D.J. Thanks so much for your kind review and so glad you enjoyed the poem. Blessings, Kay.
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You're welcome
deb
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Kay,
This is a gorgeous poem and one I have read more than once. You have penned a lovely rhyme and I like the fact that spring is an old love of yours. I know you going into winter and hopefully it won't be too cold. This poem deserves six stars but sadly I have used all of mine. Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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Hi Kay,
This is a gorgeous poem and one I have read more than once. You have penned a lovely rhyme and I like the fact that spring is an old love of yours. I know you going into winter and hopefully it won't be too cold. This poem deserves six stars but sadly I have used all of mine. Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 01-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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Hi Chey, Thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed the poem. Love, Kay.
Comment from miss joyce
You speak eloquently in this poetic verve.
I love how you describe spring.
The gay love- the green love-
An old love of mine.
This speaks of the many springs
one has experienced and loved.
I enjoyed the author notes and
the Golden Wattle is beautiful...
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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You speak eloquently in this poetic verve.
I love how you describe spring.
The gay love- the green love-
An old love of mine.
This speaks of the many springs
one has experienced and loved.
I enjoyed the author notes and
the Golden Wattle is beautiful...
Comment Written 01-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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You could not have given me more praise if you had tried. I thank you for your kind words and am pleased that you enjoyed the poem, miss joyce. Blessings, Kay.
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You are most welcome!!!
Comment from Trybuck
Spring is my favorite time of year
But summer danced her right out of here
Yet parts of her still remain
And I'm anxious to see all of her again
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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Spring is my favorite time of year
But summer danced her right out of here
Yet parts of her still remain
And I'm anxious to see all of her again
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 01-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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Hi Buck, Your review made me smile, would be nice for summer to stay awhile; alas we are in winter here and only think of spring so dear. Bless you, Kay.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Aussie,
Nice rhythm to this, it has the feel of songs like "The Man from Snowy River" and the writing of Henry Lawson, my favourite Australian author.
Nicely done, good message.
Patrick
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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Hi Aussie,
Nice rhythm to this, it has the feel of songs like "The Man from Snowy River" and the writing of Henry Lawson, my favourite Australian author.
Nicely done, good message.
Patrick
Comment Written 01-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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Patrick, Thank you friend; glad you enjoyed the poem and also that you enjoy our Australian poets. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Chris Tee
Absolutely gorgeously expressed,
I liked the refrain at the end of each stanza.
This could make a beautiful song it you find music for it.
Well done with this poem!!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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Absolutely gorgeously expressed,
I liked the refrain at the end of each stanza.
This could make a beautiful song it you find music for it.
Well done with this poem!!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2011
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Hi Chris, Thanks so much for your kind review, so pleased you liked the poem. Bless you, Kay.
