Story of a farm boy
A farm boy who has come to a city for first time2 total reviews
Comment from qtluvbug
Wonderful thought, by using metamorphic expression of bot for city, though I would say it's exactly to 5-7-5 standard but apart from that it's well portrayed.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2011
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Wonderful thought, by using metamorphic expression of bot for city, though I would say it's exactly to 5-7-5 standard but apart from that it's well portrayed.
Comment Written 31-May-2011
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2011
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Thankyou so much!!
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you are welcome
Comment from Melspoems
I don't understand what this poem is saying.
Also don't understand why it is in a5-7-5 contest when it is not a 5-7-5 poem.
Maybe you could add some authors notes!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2011
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I don't understand what this poem is saying.
Also don't understand why it is in a5-7-5 contest when it is not a 5-7-5 poem.
Maybe you could add some authors notes!
Comment Written 31-May-2011
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2011
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I read an example of a 5-7-5 poem and its pattern was similar to this. I thought this is a 5-7-5 poem but i searched it on Google and it is not, thanks for letting me know! ..and i described the poem in the author's note. Thanks again!
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Ok. I had no idea bot meant city, sorry for commenting on something I didn't understand.
