Paranormal Adventures
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Guardians Gather"Case Studies of Hauntings
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Comment from WilliamDeen
A very enjoyable read. It is well written and moved along at a nice pace from beginning to end. Good characters, story, dialogue, descriptions, and details. The ending provided the reader with a little intrigue and looking forward to the next posting. Good Work. Keep Reading & Writing! Thanks for sharing. billy
reply by the author on 28-May-2011
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A very enjoyable read. It is well written and moved along at a nice pace from beginning to end. Good characters, story, dialogue, descriptions, and details. The ending provided the reader with a little intrigue and looking forward to the next posting. Good Work. Keep Reading & Writing! Thanks for sharing. billy
Comment Written 28-May-2011
reply by the author on 28-May-2011
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Hi, billy. Thanks so much for your wonderful review. I appreciate your attention to the details! I'm enjoying myself, so I will definitely keep 'em going. Take care and thanks again! Bev
Comment from IndianaIrish
Hello Bev! What a great chapter to your book, my friend. I really like the team and the characters are really what gives your story the lure to keep coming back to read more. You're such a great writer, Bev.
Karyn :>)
reply by the author on 28-May-2011
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Hello Bev! What a great chapter to your book, my friend. I really like the team and the characters are really what gives your story the lure to keep coming back to read more. You're such a great writer, Bev.
Karyn :>)
Comment Written 28-May-2011
reply by the author on 28-May-2011
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Hi, Karyn. I really appreciate your wonderful review, lovely lady. So glad you liked this chapter. Lots more to be revealed, I'm just getting warmed up with characters. Thanks for stopping and, most of all, you kind and supportive words. Take care! Bev
Comment from livingwords
I give you great credit for excellent work. You have managed to do the impossible; interest me in a paranormal genre. Your author notes along should get you a six, but, alas, NMS (No More Sixes). Dan :))
reply by the author on 27-May-2011
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I give you great credit for excellent work. You have managed to do the impossible; interest me in a paranormal genre. Your author notes along should get you a six, but, alas, NMS (No More Sixes). Dan :))
Comment Written 27-May-2011
reply by the author on 27-May-2011
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Hi, Dan. Hey, your great review and generous five stars are good enough for me. It always means a great deal for me to know a writer of your caliber finds my writing interesting. Much appreciated! Bev
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A great poem the hairs were standing up on the back of my neck. A WELL WRITTEN STORY WITH IMAGERY. The well descriptive story was a joy to read. Thanks Mary
reply by the author on 27-May-2011
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A great poem the hairs were standing up on the back of my neck. A WELL WRITTEN STORY WITH IMAGERY. The well descriptive story was a joy to read. Thanks Mary
Comment Written 27-May-2011
reply by the author on 27-May-2011
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Hi, Mary. Thanks so much for your wonderful review! I really appreciate you reading the chapter and am happy to hear that you liked it. Thanks for stopping by! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from JW
This is a well written chapter, Bev. It definitely holds the reader's interest and makes them wonder what is going to happen next. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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This is a well written chapter, Bev. It definitely holds the reader's interest and makes them wonder what is going to happen next. Great job.
Comment Written 26-May-2011
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Hi, Jonathon. Thanks so much! I am really appreciative of your support and approval for my chapter. Hopefully, I'm all caught up on yours. Warm regards, Bev
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You are. A new one was not posted this week because I've been ill.
Jonathon
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Whew. Glad I didn't miss one. I think there's a virtual virus going around - closetpoetjester was out with a bad case of the flu. Hope you are feeling better, my friend. Take care. Bev
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Writingfundimension,
Aha, so there are more ghostly assitants in this story. Sounds like Mr Bellingham ill get a rough handling.
One typo -
bread and breakfast - bed and breakfast
Patrick
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Hi Writingfundimension,
Aha, so there are more ghostly assitants in this story. Sounds like Mr Bellingham ill get a rough handling.
One typo -
bread and breakfast - bed and breakfast
Patrick
Comment Written 26-May-2011
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Hi, Patrick. Hey, thanks for catching that typo! I really appreciate your interest and the generous review. Means a lot coming from a writer of your ability. Best wishes, Bev
Comment from 7thpoet
Quite interesting is this story, although I must regret that it is the first I've read of it. This looks to be a ghostly battle brewing, and Mia...what Power does she possess in order to do battle. Or is it battle? Loved it so far
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Quite interesting is this story, although I must regret that it is the first I've read of it. This looks to be a ghostly battle brewing, and Mia...what Power does she possess in order to do battle. Or is it battle? Loved it so far
Comment Written 26-May-2011
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Hi, 7thpoet. Hey, thank you so much for taking time out to read this chapter. There's quite a lot in previous chapter that you might find interesting should you choose to view them. Anyway, happy to have your on board and really appreciate your generous review! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Its always good to have a little supernatural help in these matters--I just wonder who the "other" one with the gift is. Another great chapter my friend.
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Its always good to have a little supernatural help in these matters--I just wonder who the "other" one with the gift is. Another great chapter my friend.
Comment Written 26-May-2011
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Thanks, PT. I really appreciate you following along. Glad you liked the chapter...your suppport and generosity are much appreciated! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from denhagan
This chapter, called "The Guardians Gather" was a very intesting chapter to read. It was about a team of four paranormal invesigators coming to Bellingham Manor to investigate a haunting. It held my interest all the way through.
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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This chapter, called "The Guardians Gather" was a very intesting chapter to read. It was about a team of four paranormal invesigators coming to Bellingham Manor to investigate a haunting. It held my interest all the way through.
Comment Written 26-May-2011
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Thanks so much, denhagen. I so appreciate you checking out my chapter and your generous review! Take care, Bev
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You are quite welcome! ~denhagan
Comment from R. K. Alan
The Tipsy Butler - love the name of this Inn
ooo... this is getting very interesting, loved the flashback in the beginning and the introduction of two friendly ghosts in her room. Ray aka R. K. Alan
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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The Tipsy Butler - love the name of this Inn
ooo... this is getting very interesting, loved the flashback in the beginning and the introduction of two friendly ghosts in her room. Ray aka R. K. Alan
Comment Written 26-May-2011
reply by the author on 26-May-2011
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Hi, Ray. Thanks so much for your generous support! I really value your input into how these chapters are going especially from someone as masterful at fiction as you are! Warm regards, Bev
