Graveyard Kisses
A Dark Club Poem50 total reviews
Comment from daymanrayne
What I could read this this poem could be about how love to you could be dead or your visit the ghost of her as you walked through the grave. This leaves so much to draw on.
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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What I could read this this poem could be about how love to you could be dead or your visit the ghost of her as you walked through the grave. This leaves so much to draw on.
Comment Written 18-May-2011
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from Herb
The poem reads well enough and has some good dark imagery. I liked it for this alone, all though i din't quite understand the theme/meaning if there was one.
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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The poem reads well enough and has some good dark imagery. I liked it for this alone, all though i din't quite understand the theme/meaning if there was one.
Comment Written 18-May-2011
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from The Stranger
excellent in its cnoception, excellent in its presentation, a sure fire favourite for the now famed "Dark Club", the group that Gungalo admins
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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excellent in its cnoception, excellent in its presentation, a sure fire favourite for the now famed "Dark Club", the group that Gungalo admins
Comment Written 18-May-2011
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from templecone
I thought the details and images throughout worked effectively. But I found that the last lines of each of the stanzas were too self-consciously poetic. Granted, they are moments of direct address, and so will not necessarily have the same degree of imagistic detail, but the other lines all convey the speaker's longing (for the beloved and for death) by means of the concrete, and they do so effectively, so perhaps the shift into abstract can be revised. Just a thought. Thanks for this!
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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I thought the details and images throughout worked effectively. But I found that the last lines of each of the stanzas were too self-consciously poetic. Granted, they are moments of direct address, and so will not necessarily have the same degree of imagistic detail, but the other lines all convey the speaker's longing (for the beloved and for death) by means of the concrete, and they do so effectively, so perhaps the shift into abstract can be revised. Just a thought. Thanks for this!
Comment Written 18-May-2011
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from dr rupali
Wow!A wonderful composition friend!
Graveyard Kisses what an imagination!!! just amazing!you wonderfully portray here a 'Soul' without any physical being but having emotions, feelings of helplessness, love for his beloved.A truly awesome dark poetry.Gungalo would love this.
All the very best to you!
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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Wow!A wonderful composition friend!
Graveyard Kisses what an imagination!!! just amazing!you wonderfully portray here a 'Soul' without any physical being but having emotions, feelings of helplessness, love for his beloved.A truly awesome dark poetry.Gungalo would love this.
All the very best to you!
Comment Written 18-May-2011
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from ameen786
A perfect package to enjoy here, the picture, the bloody font, the dark background and above all your hair raising, chilling verses, my goodness--graveyard kisses? Ooooooh, you are brave.
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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A perfect package to enjoy here, the picture, the bloody font, the dark background and above all your hair raising, chilling verses, my goodness--graveyard kisses? Ooooooh, you are brave.
Comment Written 18-May-2011
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from aestle
I liked this very much. Its the type of thing I enjoy reading. Would love to see more. Great imagery gives you the eerie feeling of a graveyard.
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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I liked this very much. Its the type of thing I enjoy reading. Would love to see more. Great imagery gives you the eerie feeling of a graveyard.
Comment Written 17-May-2011
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from rosah
this so very beautifully totally creeped me out, so i have to say you did an excellent job, and i'd give you 6 stars if i had them!!!!!!! thank you for sharing, blessings! (or should i say 'cursings?)
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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this so very beautifully totally creeped me out, so i have to say you did an excellent job, and i'd give you 6 stars if i had them!!!!!!! thank you for sharing, blessings! (or should i say 'cursings?)
Comment Written 17-May-2011
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words....dark lord
Comment from denhagan
This is an interesting quatrain-style poem written without rhyme.
I don't have any negative commentary.
I enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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This is an interesting quatrain-style poem written without rhyme.
I don't have any negative commentary.
I enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 17-May-2011
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
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You are quite welcome! ~denhagan
Comment from ulster3
Hello dark lord...
Ugh...totally scary and sick. In other words a great dark write. I think I feel a little ill, but I do wish you well.
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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Hello dark lord...
Ugh...totally scary and sick. In other words a great dark write. I think I feel a little ill, but I do wish you well.
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 17-May-2011
reply by the author on 18-May-2011
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As always, thank you for your continued support of my writing...dark lord
