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Adapting

Machines sometimes have minds of their own.

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Comment from SynchronicityATL
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LOL!
Love this. It is the grown poet's version of "the dog ate my homework."
Yes, sometimes we fall into a new artistic mode from limitations having been placed on us. The results can be stunning, and completely surprising.
Love the rhyme/assonance of "decline/line/suffice."

 Comment Written 16-May-2011

Comment from Carol Johnson
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Interesting. A thoughtful poem on an interesting topic. A very creative use of this poetry type. Interesting thoughts and a well structured poem. I found it very interesting and well presented. Great job!

 Comment Written 16-May-2011