Go late and pay high
The penalty for failure to keep the schedule2 total reviews
Comment from kitsu012
5-7-5's have limitations to their syllable count, so technically, this can't be classified as 5-7-5. It's an interesting poem, but it's not what the contest is requiring.
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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5-7-5's have limitations to their syllable count, so technically, this can't be classified as 5-7-5. It's an interesting poem, but it's not what the contest is requiring.
Comment Written 16-May-2011
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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Thank you friend for your positive comments and observations
Comment from sopranodebs
Its an interesting poem, but not technically correct. You need 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the second line and 5 syllables in the third line. You have 8-8-9. You are not within the competition guidelines for this poem
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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Its an interesting poem, but not technically correct. You need 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the second line and 5 syllables in the third line. You have 8-8-9. You are not within the competition guidelines for this poem
Comment Written 16-May-2011
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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Thank you friend for your positive comments and observations
