Dick's Heart
A humorous Haiku2 total reviews
Comment from danpald
The poem is sent with humor lent
That is fine you do well it says
Yet I would rather have Cheney's heart
Then to have Biden's snores in charge
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The poem is sent with humor lent
That is fine you do well it says
Yet I would rather have Cheney's heart
Then to have Biden's snores in charge
Comment Written 16-May-2011
Comment from samsaysagain
Excellent in syllable count in all three lines. Yes, it is humorous to some extent but this reader finds the written words in this haiku rather tasteless, and it probably is painful for someone who needs or knows someone who needs a transplant. I've graded according to correctness of contest requirements.
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Excellent in syllable count in all three lines. Yes, it is humorous to some extent but this reader finds the written words in this haiku rather tasteless, and it probably is painful for someone who needs or knows someone who needs a transplant. I've graded according to correctness of contest requirements.
Comment Written 16-May-2011
