Whispers in Shadows
A Dark Club Poem48 total reviews
Comment from Matoshka
Wow! Whispers in the shadows are all you continue to expect and respect, this was so intense and sent shivers down my spine. Loved your picture, this will fit right in. Great job. Blessings.
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Wow! Whispers in the shadows are all you continue to expect and respect, this was so intense and sent shivers down my spine. Loved your picture, this will fit right in. Great job. Blessings.
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
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Greetings Dark Lord. It was awesome.
Comment from poetbear
Deserves six stars.
It is poignant and bold beyond words. Flows masterfully well. Metaphor and imagery is spot on.
Raeds well and makes sense if one thinks outside of the box or is reading completely.
Well done.
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Deserves six stars.
It is poignant and bold beyond words. Flows masterfully well. Metaphor and imagery is spot on.
Raeds well and makes sense if one thinks outside of the box or is reading completely.
Well done.
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from R. K. Alan
Loved the dark eerie quality of this poem. Your presentation enhances the mood with red on black and a haunting image. Nicely done. Ray aka R. K. Alan
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Loved the dark eerie quality of this poem. Your presentation enhances the mood with red on black and a haunting image. Nicely done. Ray aka R. K. Alan
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from The Stranger
whispers in the shadows could be your conscience trying to warn you of impending doom should you not heed them, never ignore whispers in the shadows...
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whispers in the shadows could be your conscience trying to warn you of impending doom should you not heed them, never ignore whispers in the shadows...
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the insightful words...dark lord
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Whispers in Shadows' is an intriguing piece of poetry. This talented writer's work is more than a little tinged with death, darkness and depravity. It was a pleasure to read and review a poem of this caliber.
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'Whispers in Shadows' is an intriguing piece of poetry. This talented writer's work is more than a little tinged with death, darkness and depravity. It was a pleasure to read and review a poem of this caliber.
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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Thank you as always for the kind words...dark lord
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Dkldmcches, you're more than welcome, the Duchess
Comment from Hitcher
I think you have a little gem here friend, the first stanza was a beauty... It pulled me in and had me hanging off your every word, creative? OH YEA! Dark? Dripping in it! Presentation? Perfect!!
Good luck Dkld, GOOD LUCK!
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I think you have a little gem here friend, the first stanza was a beauty... It pulled me in and had me hanging off your every word, creative? OH YEA! Dark? Dripping in it! Presentation? Perfect!!
Good luck Dkld, GOOD LUCK!
Comment Written 12-May-2011
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WOW!!!!! Thank you so very much for the six star rating. I am so pleased that you think this highly of my work...dark lord
Comment from MENNIPLOSS
CONGRATULATIONS YOU HAVE WRITTEN A GOOD POEM, EITHER STRUCTURED, OR WRITTEN AND FURTHERMORE INTERESTING. CONGRATULATIONS ARE A GOOD WORK. WITH QUALITY.
MENNIPLOSS
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CONGRATULATIONS YOU HAVE WRITTEN A GOOD POEM, EITHER STRUCTURED, OR WRITTEN AND FURTHERMORE INTERESTING. CONGRATULATIONS ARE A GOOD WORK. WITH QUALITY.
MENNIPLOSS
Comment Written 11-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from Des Beirne
Very deep, dark and disturbing, I hope that's seen as a compliment.
I felt that the language you used enhanced the piece, it didn't feel at all tacky, as some dark poetry does.
A great write.
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Very deep, dark and disturbing, I hope that's seen as a compliment.
I felt that the language you used enhanced the piece, it didn't feel at all tacky, as some dark poetry does.
A great write.
Comment Written 11-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dak lord
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi Drklrd,
You have an interesting poetic voice, a great imagination and quite capably word paint a strong picture of the darker side of life. Lots of action in this one! Your "dark club" will be smiling and so am I. :-) Cheers, W ^-^
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Hi Drklrd,
You have an interesting poetic voice, a great imagination and quite capably word paint a strong picture of the darker side of life. Lots of action in this one! Your "dark club" will be smiling and so am I. :-) Cheers, W ^-^
Comment Written 11-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from DonandVicki
I like your use and structure of free verse. It is dark and foreboding. The choice of art work that you chose enhances your work..Don
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I like your use and structure of free verse. It is dark and foreboding. The choice of art work that you chose enhances your work..Don
Comment Written 11-May-2011
reply by the author on 12-May-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
