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A Most Treasured Rose

Free Verse

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Comment from moyramouse
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What a beautiful tribute to your friend, I'm sure she was very touched by this poem. You have illustrated it with the most beautiful photograph.
I loved the similes of the rose for purity of friendship and the heart of the soul.
A poem full of genuine emotion. xxmouse

 Comment Written 03-May-2011


reply by the author on 03-May-2011
    Thank you dear, for such a lovely and touching review, I truly
    appreciate it. Indeed, we are both blessed in this friendship!
    So pleased you liked it so well, and shared your uplifting
    thougts and compliments. Have a blessedly beautiful day
    friend, as beams from your gracious generosity of thought
    and appreciation.
Comment from chita
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You have good imagery and a good flow with your poem-you write about how your best friend is so precious to you and that you have been blessed to have her in your life--I like where you write(white rose is like the purest of friendship) a wonderful write-great job.

 Comment Written 03-May-2011


reply by the author on 03-May-2011
    Thank you dear chita, for such an uplifting review. Indeed, we
    are both blessed in this friendship. I appreciate you sharing
    your graciou thoughts and comments on it; and the writing.
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
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Hello you, I mean who?

Brilliant. A 'simple' but glorious and sensitive tribute to your wonderful friend.

I can only imagine the words of the poem also reflect how he she fills about your friendship with him herself. A delight to read and a great reminder of true friendship.

All my best, Pete

 Comment Written 03-May-2011


reply by the author on 03-May-2011
    Thank you Pete, for such a wonderfully supportive review, so
    glad you liked it so well. Indeed, such treasured friendships
    are rare, and we are both truly blessed in ours. Very best
    wishes to you always too.
Comment from denhagan
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This was a nice poem comparing a white rose with a best friend.
Could have made longer.
I enjoyed reading this poem about friendship.

 Comment Written 03-May-2011


reply by the author on 03-May-2011
    Thank you for your thoughtful review, and kind comments.
    Yes, could have been longer, but my friend is the kind
    of person that likes sentiments simple and brief, so I tried
    to oblige for that reason. A very astute comment, and I
    appreciate your input on it. Have a terrific day.
reply by denhagan on 03-May-2011
    You're very welcome! ~denhagan
Comment from lilnikki215
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Love this. It is amazing. The first few lines kept me reading. They were very good. This poem is very sweet. The message is simple and clear, very well-said.

 Comment Written 03-May-2011


reply by the author on 03-May-2011
    Thank you for your very appreciative review, I am pleased
    you enjoyed it, and shared your kind thoughnts and comments.
    Best wishes, have a wonderful day.
Comment from Gungalo
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The heart of a white rose
is like the heart
of the soul;
it's inner beauty
breathlessly sublime

Hey Ronni, this is a beautiful tribute to your friend Evelyn. I know she's gonna flip over it when she reads it. Love the pic of that white rose and the way you used it to really show the true meaning of this write.

Great free verse girl and awesome poetic style!!!

 Comment Written 03-May-2011


reply by the author on 03-May-2011
    Thank you dear, for such a terrific review, very heart warming!
    Glad you enjoyed, and bless you for your enthusiasim and
    compliments! What a treat you are too!
reply by Gungalo on 03-May-2011
    Sigh ... just love ya and your poetry girl!!! Have a great night.
Comment from MissMerri
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This is simply beautiful, Ronni, both in meaning and in presentation. The whole theme is touchingly sweet and the apt simile of a white rose like a pure friendship is lovely. I see nothing I would want changed. It is as beautiful as a rose. :p

 Comment Written 03-May-2011


reply by the author on 03-May-2011
    Thank you Merri, for such a warm review, sincerely appreciated.
    So glad you enjoyed; and as always, touched by your warm and
    gracious comments and compliments! You are special too!
Comment from Paradox Tremors
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A beautifully written piece of writing my friend. A white rose always reminds me of the purest and truest sense of friendship between two friends. Enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 03-May-2011


reply by the author on 03-May-2011
    Thank you PT, for your thoughtful review. Glad you appreicated
    it, and so great of you to stop by again and share your kind
    thoughts and comments. Best always.
Comment from Queenise
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My friend, this is so well written and a wonderful tribute to your friend Evelyn. It has good imagery, the pace and flow is nice and the message rings clear and loud. The art of the rose is breath-taking as is your poem. Blessings. Queenise

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 Comment Written 03-May-2011


reply by the author on 03-May-2011
    Thank you Queenise, for such a wonderful review. I am so
    pleased you liked it. And your wonderfully encouraging
    comments and compliments, most sincerely appreciated too.
    Blessings to you always my friend.
reply by Queenise on 03-May-2011
    You're welcome. Queenise
Comment from l.raven
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Roses are my most favorite flower.I love all their colors.Have had them in my yard for years.Their beautiful,and make you feel good when your around them.much like your friend.Love the wording,and the picture is beautiful.very nice

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 Comment Written 03-May-2011


reply by the author on 03-May-2011
    Thank you for your thoughtful review. I am so pleased you
    liked it, and share your encouraging comments and compliments.
    Best to yo always.