A Most Treasured Rose
Free Verse20 total reviews
Comment from moyramouse
What a beautiful tribute to your friend, I'm sure she was very touched by this poem. You have illustrated it with the most beautiful photograph.
I loved the similes of the rose for purity of friendship and the heart of the soul.
A poem full of genuine emotion. xxmouse
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
What a beautiful tribute to your friend, I'm sure she was very touched by this poem. You have illustrated it with the most beautiful photograph.
I loved the similes of the rose for purity of friendship and the heart of the soul.
A poem full of genuine emotion. xxmouse
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you dear, for such a lovely and touching review, I truly
appreciate it. Indeed, we are both blessed in this friendship!
So pleased you liked it so well, and shared your uplifting
thougts and compliments. Have a blessedly beautiful day
friend, as beams from your gracious generosity of thought
and appreciation.
Comment from chita
You have good imagery and a good flow with your poem-you write about how your best friend is so precious to you and that you have been blessed to have her in your life--I like where you write(white rose is like the purest of friendship) a wonderful write-great job.
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
You have good imagery and a good flow with your poem-you write about how your best friend is so precious to you and that you have been blessed to have her in your life--I like where you write(white rose is like the purest of friendship) a wonderful write-great job.
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you dear chita, for such an uplifting review. Indeed, we
are both blessed in this friendship. I appreciate you sharing
your graciou thoughts and comments on it; and the writing.
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hello you, I mean who?
Brilliant. A 'simple' but glorious and sensitive tribute to your wonderful friend.
I can only imagine the words of the poem also reflect how he she fills about your friendship with him herself. A delight to read and a great reminder of true friendship.
All my best, Pete
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
Hello you, I mean who?
Brilliant. A 'simple' but glorious and sensitive tribute to your wonderful friend.
I can only imagine the words of the poem also reflect how he she fills about your friendship with him herself. A delight to read and a great reminder of true friendship.
All my best, Pete
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you Pete, for such a wonderfully supportive review, so
glad you liked it so well. Indeed, such treasured friendships
are rare, and we are both truly blessed in ours. Very best
wishes to you always too.
Comment from denhagan
This was a nice poem comparing a white rose with a best friend.
Could have made longer.
I enjoyed reading this poem about friendship.
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
This was a nice poem comparing a white rose with a best friend.
Could have made longer.
I enjoyed reading this poem about friendship.
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you for your thoughtful review, and kind comments.
Yes, could have been longer, but my friend is the kind
of person that likes sentiments simple and brief, so I tried
to oblige for that reason. A very astute comment, and I
appreciate your input on it. Have a terrific day.
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You're very welcome! ~denhagan
Comment from lilnikki215
Love this. It is amazing. The first few lines kept me reading. They were very good. This poem is very sweet. The message is simple and clear, very well-said.
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
Love this. It is amazing. The first few lines kept me reading. They were very good. This poem is very sweet. The message is simple and clear, very well-said.
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you for your very appreciative review, I am pleased
you enjoyed it, and shared your kind thoughnts and comments.
Best wishes, have a wonderful day.
Comment from Gungalo
The heart of a white rose
is like the heart
of the soul;
it's inner beauty
breathlessly sublime
Hey Ronni, this is a beautiful tribute to your friend Evelyn. I know she's gonna flip over it when she reads it. Love the pic of that white rose and the way you used it to really show the true meaning of this write.
Great free verse girl and awesome poetic style!!!
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
The heart of a white rose
is like the heart
of the soul;
it's inner beauty
breathlessly sublime
Hey Ronni, this is a beautiful tribute to your friend Evelyn. I know she's gonna flip over it when she reads it. Love the pic of that white rose and the way you used it to really show the true meaning of this write.
Great free verse girl and awesome poetic style!!!
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you dear, for such a terrific review, very heart warming!
Glad you enjoyed, and bless you for your enthusiasim and
compliments! What a treat you are too!
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Sigh ... just love ya and your poetry girl!!! Have a great night.
Comment from MissMerri
This is simply beautiful, Ronni, both in meaning and in presentation. The whole theme is touchingly sweet and the apt simile of a white rose like a pure friendship is lovely. I see nothing I would want changed. It is as beautiful as a rose. :p
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
This is simply beautiful, Ronni, both in meaning and in presentation. The whole theme is touchingly sweet and the apt simile of a white rose like a pure friendship is lovely. I see nothing I would want changed. It is as beautiful as a rose. :p
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you Merri, for such a warm review, sincerely appreciated.
So glad you enjoyed; and as always, touched by your warm and
gracious comments and compliments! You are special too!
Comment from Paradox Tremors
A beautifully written piece of writing my friend. A white rose always reminds me of the purest and truest sense of friendship between two friends. Enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
A beautifully written piece of writing my friend. A white rose always reminds me of the purest and truest sense of friendship between two friends. Enjoyed it.
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you PT, for your thoughtful review. Glad you appreicated
it, and so great of you to stop by again and share your kind
thoughts and comments. Best always.
Comment from Queenise
My friend, this is so well written and a wonderful tribute to your friend Evelyn. It has good imagery, the pace and flow is nice and the message rings clear and loud. The art of the rose is breath-taking as is your poem. Blessings. Queenise
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reply by the author on 03-May-2011
My friend, this is so well written and a wonderful tribute to your friend Evelyn. It has good imagery, the pace and flow is nice and the message rings clear and loud. The art of the rose is breath-taking as is your poem. Blessings. Queenise
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Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you Queenise, for such a wonderful review. I am so
pleased you liked it. And your wonderfully encouraging
comments and compliments, most sincerely appreciated too.
Blessings to you always my friend.
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You're welcome. Queenise
Comment from l.raven
Roses are my most favorite flower.I love all their colors.Have had them in my yard for years.Their beautiful,and make you feel good when your around them.much like your friend.Love the wording,and the picture is beautiful.very nice
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reply by the author on 03-May-2011
Roses are my most favorite flower.I love all their colors.Have had them in my yard for years.Their beautiful,and make you feel good when your around them.much like your friend.Love the wording,and the picture is beautiful.very nice
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Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you for your thoughtful review. I am so pleased you
liked it, and share your encouraging comments and compliments.
Best to yo always.