A Most Treasured Rose
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Comment from mermaids
This is the first poem I have read about a white rose. It just makes me feel good and I like the comparison to the soul. It is a unique gift for your best friend.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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This is the first poem I have read about a white rose. It just makes me feel good and I like the comparison to the soul. It is a unique gift for your best friend.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2012
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Thank you for your generous and uplifting thoughts and
compliments on this poem. Sincerely appreciated. So
glad it resonated so pleasureably to you. Best wishes always..
Comment from Joan E.
What a striking picture and presentation and dedication to your friend. I enjoyed your similes, "treasure" metaphor and sentiment. -Joan
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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What a striking picture and presentation and dedication to your friend. I enjoyed your similes, "treasure" metaphor and sentiment. -Joan
Comment Written 05-May-2011
reply by the author on 05-May-2011
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Thank you dear Joan, for your thoughtful review. Glad you
enjoyed it; and shared your complimentary thoughts. We are
both blessed in this friendship indeed. Blessing and best
wishes to you always. You light up my little corener every
time you stop by! So appreciated.
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Thanks for sharing your fine work and sending your gracious response. We are indeed fortunate. Sweet dreams- Joan
Comment from Kevin C
This is really a lovely write. Great presentation and great format. Your words are so easily read and what you express is great. You really sum up what a best friend is all about.
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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This is really a lovely write. Great presentation and great format. Your words are so easily read and what you express is great. You really sum up what a best friend is all about.
Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Thank you Kevin, for your uplifting review, sincerely appreciated. Indeed, we are both blessed in this friendship.
I am pleased you liked it too, and share your kind thoughts
and comments. Best wishes always.
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You are quite welcome and you have a great friend there.
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Beeeeeeautiful and well deserved!
From what I know about this lovely lady, a rose is a perfect way to describe her! Your comparisons to friendship is a creative metaphor.
A white rose is an image I want to attempt painting but it's more difficult than one would think.
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Beeeeeeautiful and well deserved!
From what I know about this lovely lady, a rose is a perfect way to describe her! Your comparisons to friendship is a creative metaphor.
A white rose is an image I want to attempt painting but it's more difficult than one would think.
Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Thank you for perceptive review; glad you liked it. I am
sure you can do the white rose painting; so I hope you give
it a try. Appreciate the visit.
Comment from ameen786
Wow! What a wonderful composition with a beautiful white rose, Evelyn J should be very proud of herself for this lovely tribute. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Wow! What a wonderful composition with a beautiful white rose, Evelyn J should be very proud of herself for this lovely tribute. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review, sincerely appreciated.
I am pleased you enjoyed it. We are both blessed in this
friendship, and she loved it to pieces! I appreciate you
stopping to share your thoughts and compliments on it too.
Blessings and best wishes to you always!
Comment from RebelRose
This is a beautiful poem about a most beautiful flower (my favorite, the rose). I am sure your friend is fortunate to have you as a friend.
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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This is a beautiful poem about a most beautiful flower (my favorite, the rose). I am sure your friend is fortunate to have you as a friend.
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you for such a lovely review, I am so pleased you liked
it, and shared your kind and thoughtful comments. We are
both blessed and fortunate in our frienship. God Bless and
blessings to you too.
Comment from Dom G Robles
The poem is beautiful as well as the white rose. The beginning of the poem alone is magnificent, "The delicate beauty of a white rose is like the the purest of friendships
each petals delicately formed: nurtured with tender loving care." And the author goes on: "The heart of a white rose is like the heart of a soul; its inner beauty breathlessly sublime." And the last part shines brightly: "The treasure of this white rose represents My Best Friend most precious friendship I've been blessed to have." Congratulations. Dom
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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The poem is beautiful as well as the white rose. The beginning of the poem alone is magnificent, "The delicate beauty of a white rose is like the the purest of friendships
each petals delicately formed: nurtured with tender loving care." And the author goes on: "The heart of a white rose is like the heart of a soul; its inner beauty breathlessly sublime." And the last part shines brightly: "The treasure of this white rose represents My Best Friend most precious friendship I've been blessed to have." Congratulations. Dom
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you Dom, for such a wonderful review, I am so pleaded
and touched you liked it so well. Also appreciate you sharing
your kind comments and compliments. Best wishes always.
Comment from Connie P
What a beautiful tribute to both your friend and the white rose. I love the free verse style you've chosen for this piece. Your friend will be honored.
Connie
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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What a beautiful tribute to both your friend and the white rose. I love the free verse style you've chosen for this piece. Your friend will be honored.
Connie
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you for such a great review. Truly appreciated. Glad
you enjoyed. We indeed are both blessed, and she loved it too!
Thanks for sharing your kind thoughts and compliments and the
treat rating. Best wishes always.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful tribute of friendship to your friend, ronnie, i really enjoyed reading this and i wish you the best with the reviewers. great job writing this one.
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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this is a beautiful tribute of friendship to your friend, ronnie, i really enjoyed reading this and i wish you the best with the reviewers. great job writing this one.
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you for the terrific review, and such complimentary
comments on this presentation. For the EXTRA STAR...I AM
TRULY TOUCHED! BLESSINGS AND FONDEST REGARDS ALWAYS.
Comment from poetbear
We have something in common as it was High schol where my first award happened but that is nt why I write and you know that.
I love white flowers and this really touched me. It is beauty and grace personified.
It must be read for its exquisite verse and magic.
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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We have something in common as it was High schol where my first award happened but that is nt why I write and you know that.
I love white flowers and this really touched me. It is beauty and grace personified.
It must be read for its exquisite verse and magic.
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you for your marvelous review, sincerely appreciated.
How nice to know we share that similar H.S. award experience.
I am so pleased you liked this poem so well. Both of us ar
blessed in this special friendship. Thanks ever so much for
your lovely comments and compliments on the presentation;
and great rating for it. Best wishes always.
