Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Indeed we are all recovering from something, and often we have relapses! I relished your descriptions of recovery and particularly liked your metaphors: "rubble of broken dreams/thunder/thread/fabric." -Joan

 Comment Written 02-May-2011

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reply by the author on 02-May-2011

Thank you

Comment from LKM2009

Excellent

Wow that is beautiful. A wonderfully written poem with an equally wonderful message. I feel privliged to have read it. Good poem and good luck with your next.

 Comment Written 02-May-2011

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reply by the author on 02-May-2011

thank you.

Comment from emmaysavage

Exceptional

I think you caught the gist of the recovery process, it so much more revealing and moving words. I eapecially liked the sob muffled in rage, the silk thread, and the end, the freed spirit.

 Comment Written 02-May-2011

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reply by the author on 02-May-2011

thanks so much for the rating.

Comment from danpald

Excellent

Beautiful poem written with care
The theme so well displayed
For the fruits of recovery
Are softly here laid bare

Sweet the poem so soft to read
Nice to reflect upon the theme
For the need of relaxing
Each day free of resentment and regrets

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 Comment Written 02-May-2011

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reply by the author on 02-May-2011

thanks or the read.

Comment from The Stranger

Excellent

well there are always times in our daily routines where we need to take out time to recover from something, be it bad news or just taking "5" out after a jog round the block

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 Comment Written 02-May-2011

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reply by the author on 02-May-2011

thank you