Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Part three chapter three"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Piggies Grandma
Even though this is the first passage I have read of your story, your words drew me into your story line. I feel sorry for the mother but I am fearful of what Troy's demons will turn out to be. You have researched your work and your well written words were a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Even though this is the first passage I have read of your story, your words drew me into your story line. I feel sorry for the mother but I am fearful of what Troy's demons will turn out to be. You have researched your work and your well written words were a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from bhogg
I apparently have given you a six too recently to give you another. This has been a terrific series of postings. The added author notes are great. Perhaps the right person will read and be helped. Some day I'll write the story of the only woman (girl) I hit. I was nine years old, she was 13 and bigger than me. My dad wore my butt out. Warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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I apparently have given you a six too recently to give you another. This has been a terrific series of postings. The added author notes are great. Perhaps the right person will read and be helped. Some day I'll write the story of the only woman (girl) I hit. I was nine years old, she was 13 and bigger than me. My dad wore my butt out. Warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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I can't wait for your story. I appreciate your review and you constant support.
Comment from jamma
This is really good. I was drawn in from the first sentence. Thank you for posting statistics. You never know who you can help. Thanks again for a good write. Keep going!
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This is really good. I was drawn in from the first sentence. Thank you for posting statistics. You never know who you can help. Thanks again for a good write. Keep going!
Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Tellis
He is a good guy and I hope people don't think that most men are violent with their spouse. I enjoyed this excellent chapter.
Tellis
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He is a good guy and I hope people don't think that most men are violent with their spouse. I enjoyed this excellent chapter.
Tellis
Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind post. I am sure people know there are good guys in the world.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Thanks for all the great info in the author's note. The percentage of women abused is so much higher than I would ever have guessed. This is a well written chapter, and as I have said before, I am so glad you are bringing this problem to light! DEbbie
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Thanks for all the great info in the author's note. The percentage of women abused is so much higher than I would ever have guessed. This is a well written chapter, and as I have said before, I am so glad you are bringing this problem to light! DEbbie
Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Joan E.
Your statistics are unfathomable! Thank you also for including the 800 number and breaking up the long chapter 3. You have painted a very likable character in Troy and caused us to care about what happens to Anna and Michael. -Joan
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Your statistics are unfathomable! Thank you also for including the 800 number and breaking up the long chapter 3. You have painted a very likable character in Troy and caused us to care about what happens to Anna and Michael. -Joan
Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RebelRose
This is another great chapter. I hope she is able to get away from Bobby permanently but I have a feeling he is not going to give up easily. They seldom do. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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This is another great chapter. I hope she is able to get away from Bobby permanently but I have a feeling he is not going to give up easily. They seldom do. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Booby will return and he's not happy. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Fireshadow
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Barbara, this is another very wel penned segment, Richly textured words convey very well, directly or indirectly, emotions felt by both Anna and Troy. I'm happy there's a glimpse of hope for Anna's future. Found no spag errors. Your author notes provide very valuable information which I'm sure will prove to be helpfull for those who may need it. Thanks for sharing.
Ama
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Barbara, this is another very wel penned segment, Richly textured words convey very well, directly or indirectly, emotions felt by both Anna and Troy. I'm happy there's a glimpse of hope for Anna's future. Found no spag errors. Your author notes provide very valuable information which I'm sure will prove to be helpfull for those who may need it. Thanks for sharing.
Ama
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from patmedium
This is a stunning piece of work, Barbara. I have been looking forward to this section. Good, strong images and clear emotional transfer. xxx
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This is a stunning piece of work, Barbara. I have been looking forward to this section. Good, strong images and clear emotional transfer. xxx
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Scornwell
As well written as I have come to expect. Your characters come across well and the dialog sounds realistic and natural. Three cheers for Troy. While I hope this is leading to a happy ending, I hope Bobby gets his comeuppance somewhere along the way.
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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As well written as I have come to expect. Your characters come across well and the dialog sounds realistic and natural. Three cheers for Troy. While I hope this is leading to a happy ending, I hope Bobby gets his comeuppance somewhere along the way.
Comment Written 03-May-2011
reply by the author on 03-May-2011
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Bobby will return very soon. Thank you for your kind review.
