Crafted Within
It is in all of us.27 total reviews
Comment from PoesyPoet
I don't think it is the devil that clouds a child's mind. I think the parents are responsible for that. I like the darkness of this one and thought it was good work. PP
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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I don't think it is the devil that clouds a child's mind. I think the parents are responsible for that. I like the darkness of this one and thought it was good work. PP
Comment Written 26-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
Comment from c_lucas
Good vs Evil has a history going back millelianums. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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Good vs Evil has a history going back millelianums. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
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You're welcome.
Comment from chita
You have great artwork and a good flow with your poem-you are descriptive and write with emotion about the anti-christ who is really alive but we do not know who he is-I like where you write (Already contaminated with the will of the Dark One) a thought provoking write--well penned-great job.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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You have great artwork and a good flow with your poem-you are descriptive and write with emotion about the anti-christ who is really alive but we do not know who he is-I like where you write (Already contaminated with the will of the Dark One) a thought provoking write--well penned-great job.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kindreview...dark lord
Comment from l.raven
Very well written.I like the way you worded this poem.It is up to us not to let the Devil in.Should we choose to do that hell is got it's doors open.Great job.Haven't heard from you in awhile.Were you gone?Or did I just by pass you?I come on then off.But I used to see you more.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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Very well written.I like the way you worded this poem.It is up to us not to let the Devil in.Should we choose to do that hell is got it's doors open.Great job.Haven't heard from you in awhile.Were you gone?Or did I just by pass you?I come on then off.But I used to see you more.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind review. I was in the hospital for two weeks, that is why I have not been writing...dark lord
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OH my.I hope you are ok now.I hate hospitals.take care of your self. Miss ya Linda
Comment from Gungalo
Influencing those with Religious aspirations, God falters
Mentioned almost everyday, The Dark One reigns over many.
Loving those who fall by the wayside, He welcomes them into his fold.
Entering a new dimension, the world awaits His next move.
This is a real pensive write you. It's true, mention Jesus and always the devil is mentioned so his name is called out or on every day.
Can't imagine what comes next. Sure hope I don't have to see it. Well done in great unrhymed quatrains, Dark Lord!!!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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Influencing those with Religious aspirations, God falters
Mentioned almost everyday, The Dark One reigns over many.
Loving those who fall by the wayside, He welcomes them into his fold.
Entering a new dimension, the world awaits His next move.
This is a real pensive write you. It's true, mention Jesus and always the devil is mentioned so his name is called out or on every day.
Can't imagine what comes next. Sure hope I don't have to see it. Well done in great unrhymed quatrains, Dark Lord!!!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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As always, thank you so very much for the vote of confidence, I appreciate it...dark lord
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My pleasure, as always!!!
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Dark Lord,
Once again you have written a deliciously dark poem. I guess all of us has succumbed to the Dark One at least a few times. He doesn't care what souls he garners with his evil ways but to ignore his pull is something we all should do. Your well chosen words are stark and expressive. An excellent free verse.....chey
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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Hi Dark Lord,
Once again you have written a deliciously dark poem. I guess all of us has succumbed to the Dark One at least a few times. He doesn't care what souls he garners with his evil ways but to ignore his pull is something we all should do. Your well chosen words are stark and expressive. An excellent free verse.....chey
Comment Written 26-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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As always, thank you so very much for the very kind review, I do appreciate it...dark lord
Comment from Laurie Clayton
This is a wonderfully dark write about the power of
thought and how we can create our own evil.
Well written with strong evocative imagery.
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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This is a wonderfully dark write about the power of
thought and how we can create our own evil.
Well written with strong evocative imagery.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2011
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Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
