Clamor for Change
Is History repeating itself?16 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
Nice commentary on the History that we should be learning from and don't. We seem to be repeating a lot of things that we should have learned from history books...Don
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2011
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Nice commentary on the History that we should be learning from and don't. We seem to be repeating a lot of things that we should have learned from history books...Don
Comment Written 22-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2011
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Don, Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. Your kind words are appreciated.
Comment from dylan49
Very well written had a great flow. Thank you for sharing it with me I enjoyed it very much. If you have the time maybe you could take a read of my poem (Please wake me up) It's my first poem so I'm looking for any feedback and reviews possible. Thanks again
Dylan
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2011
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Very well written had a great flow. Thank you for sharing it with me I enjoyed it very much. If you have the time maybe you could take a read of my poem (Please wake me up) It's my first poem so I'm looking for any feedback and reviews possible. Thanks again
Dylan
Comment Written 22-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2011
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Dyland, Thanks for taking the time to read and review my work. Your kind words are appreciated. Yes, I will look at your poem.
Comment from Connie P
Very well said. History is destined to repeat itself if we don't keep a vigilant watch. It sickens me to see our Constitution slowly erode at the hand of legislators and judges with their own agendas. Even my own (grown) children won't listen and every time I bring it up, I get the 'oh no, here she goes again' look.
Thanks for posting!
Connie
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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Very well said. History is destined to repeat itself if we don't keep a vigilant watch. It sickens me to see our Constitution slowly erode at the hand of legislators and judges with their own agendas. Even my own (grown) children won't listen and every time I bring it up, I get the 'oh no, here she goes again' look.
Thanks for posting!
Connie
Comment Written 20-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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Thank you, Connie P, for taking the time to read and review my work. It is appreciated.
Comment from Deejharrington
You are so right and have written about it so well. Yes, it seems like we repeat our mistakes like Korea and Vietnam. And haven't learned a thing. Didn't the Great Depression teach us anything? Maybe we just refuse to listen. Very well penned.
dj
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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You are so right and have written about it so well. Yes, it seems like we repeat our mistakes like Korea and Vietnam. And haven't learned a thing. Didn't the Great Depression teach us anything? Maybe we just refuse to listen. Very well penned.
dj
Comment Written 20-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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Thank you, dj, for taking the time to read and review my work. Your kind words are greatly appreciated.
Comment from l.raven
Very well written.And so very true.And well said.I don't know if it's to late for change.I do know for a lot of people (Millions)who have lost their homes,jobs, cars etc.It is to late.Has a good flow and good rhythm and rhyme.And the picture is perfect.good job
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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Very well written.And so very true.And well said.I don't know if it's to late for change.I do know for a lot of people (Millions)who have lost their homes,jobs, cars etc.It is to late.Has a good flow and good rhythm and rhyme.And the picture is perfect.good job
Comment Written 19-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. Your kind words are apprecited.
Comment from Gungalo
Satan's dominions rape this land
Stealing right to bear arms unjust;
Denying rights to bless our land
Raises a free men's valiant thrust;
Like this write Old Foggie. The verse above reminded me of a movement across the states by the Free Men. Not so sure they have it exactly all together either.
Your write is openly honest and full of imagery!!!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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Satan's dominions rape this land
Stealing right to bear arms unjust;
Denying rights to bless our land
Raises a free men's valiant thrust;
Like this write Old Foggie. The verse above reminded me of a movement across the states by the Free Men. Not so sure they have it exactly all together either.
Your write is openly honest and full of imagery!!!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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Gungalo, thank you for again taking the time to read and review my work. I always look forward to your comments. Your kind words are appreciated.
Comment from chita
History always repeats itself in my opinion-you have good rhythm and rhyme all through your poem-you are descriptive and write with emotion-you have written a poem that makes me think--you write about deadly viruses-and how Satan dominion rapes the land--I really like where you write (Greed and lust a slippery slope-Deadly virus rapes freedom range) a well penned poem--great job.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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History always repeats itself in my opinion-you have good rhythm and rhyme all through your poem-you are descriptive and write with emotion-you have written a poem that makes me think--you write about deadly viruses-and how Satan dominion rapes the land--I really like where you write (Greed and lust a slippery slope-Deadly virus rapes freedom range) a well penned poem--great job.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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Thank you, chita, for taking the time to read and review my work. Your kind words are greatly appreciated.
Comment from cjsthoughts
IT SEEMS LIKE IT IS...
MY FAVORITE PART IN THIS WONDERFUL PIECE OF ART IS
Pride of country touches the sand
Patriot's throbbing heart robust;
With love grand United we stand,
God's guidance democracy's must.
THANKS FOR SHARING.
CHERYL
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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IT SEEMS LIKE IT IS...
MY FAVORITE PART IN THIS WONDERFUL PIECE OF ART IS
Pride of country touches the sand
Patriot's throbbing heart robust;
With love grand United we stand,
God's guidance democracy's must.
THANKS FOR SHARING.
CHERYL
Comment Written 19-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work. I apprecite your kind words.
Comment from Scarlettdreams
A lot of truth in this well worded piece. Sadly it seems as a society we haven't learned from our history that is riddled with acts of inhumanity. A sombering write. Bravo
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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A lot of truth in this well worded piece. Sadly it seems as a society we haven't learned from our history that is riddled with acts of inhumanity. A sombering write. Bravo
Comment Written 19-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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Thank you, Scarlettdreams, for taking the time to read and review my work. Your comments are appreciated.
Comment from Carolyn 12
Saying I enjoyed your poem is not the right words..It is hard to enjoy seeing change within the USA and knowing that change is not always so good.I did enjoy the way you pulled it all together in a way so easily to read.I just read online where Castro is stepping down.. I wonder what change that will bring..
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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Saying I enjoyed your poem is not the right words..It is hard to enjoy seeing change within the USA and knowing that change is not always so good.I did enjoy the way you pulled it all together in a way so easily to read.I just read online where Castro is stepping down.. I wonder what change that will bring..
Comment Written 19-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2011
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Thank you, carolyn12, for taking the time to read and review my work. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
