Comment from Galadriel's Lyric

Excellent

Awesome dark poem! Excellent alliteration! Perfect meter and all that is poetic. Deliciously darkened backdrop for this hate filled portrait. Good luck in the contest!

~Kristie Jo

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2011

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Whoa there!!! This surely is dark and a write to remember for it sharp but deep cuts into the blackest of hearts. Love it and so glad Sasil sent you to the Dark Club. Gory but great picture too you!!! I just love this mastery!!!


Welcome to the Dark Club!!!! This entery entitles you to a lifetime membership to the club and a chance to win our coveted Dark Club Crown for the darkest write of the week1!!! Good luck, Realist. Thank you!!!!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2011

Comment from Veekz

Exceptional

I understand, my friend. I'm so sorry, I have been caught up in my own heartache and haven't been on in a good while and here you are still being hounded and harassed by these horrible people. I wish they would just leave you and yours the f*** alone! They are horrid, horrid people with little pathetic lives (if you can call it a life) of their own and have nothing better to do then send you crazy and I HATE them for that! Thinking of you xox

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2011

Comment from Judian James

Excellent

MY WORD WOMAN!!! I hate this genre, but you did a bloody brilliant job with this one. The photo is hideous and the words are frightening. You should enter this in Gungalo's
Dark Club!! Excellent, Sue. Was it cathartic??

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2011

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2011

Thank you Judian!! I finally got it entered...I just wrote this out of pure fury at being run out of my house by these KKK idiots. Or whoever they were. It helps me to write anything...and many times, I do just write because it comes out. THank you Jude, and I hope you have great neighbors!! xoxo!! Susan ps...I have to be out of here by Monday and have 10 animals to board and no place to go yet! Wish me luck? HUG! Susan

Comment from Minglement

Exceptional

I love this evocative, powerfully expressive poem on the 'demons'. Fabulous use of creative verbiage and phraseology to paint a picture of a dark place. Hugs to you and well done! Marcia

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2011

Comment from sasil

Exceptional

Wow! That artwork is stunning! I can see no face or head for that matter. And the teeth are so sparkling white! Eeek! Like the repetitious/refrains/phrases--highly stylized poem here. You leave this open for interpretation, which is a bonus for those like myself who like to draw their own conclusions. Me? I get this high-emotion write stems from a feeling of regret, of obligation or that of being trapped in a situation not by choice. Excellent work--pm Gungalo and sub this to her weekly "Dark Club" contest--I think this one's a winner!

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2011

Comment from Kathryn Varuzza

Excellent

Hi Susan,
Whoa!
This is powerful!
Gory!
Dark!
Cool too.
Great title.
Creepy and great image
Flows well
Love the sounds of the words
Loved every word.
xoxo,
Katie

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2011

Comment from taravan

Excellent

Love this!!! You hold such darkness in your words written so eloquently. I love speeding up of the drum. It is exactly what it should be. Oh and that picture is a wonderful addition to your work.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2011

Comment from carmen vargas

Excellent

A tragic poem that points out the murderers of the night from the underworld with all its demons. Fluid lines. IMAGES strong. Congratulations and greetings.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2011

Comment from Dale95

Excellent

I like that poem, and the dark message it conveys too. I usually don't get most of the poems I read, I'm poetly challenged I guess, but I got this one. Good job. Write On. -Dale

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2011