Comment from Zue65

Excellent

Haunted houses have always been an effective subject for supernatural fiction and horror stories and your story fit the category to a T. You have natural gift for storytelling and helped progressed your story forward. Kudos, God bless.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Yes, they have always given me the creeps! Thanks so much for this generous and encouraging review. I appreciate you taking time to read. :) Bev

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

I am very glad a get a chance to visit this writing from long ago. It is very interesting and if I compare it to your last book, I am sure you can see a big difference and see how your writing had developed in such a short time. Great stuff.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Thanks so much, CR. I am extensively editing each chapter before it goes out because it'd be even more painfully obvious was a novice I was when I started this three years ago LoL. Thanks so much for the encouraging review.

:) Bev

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

The misty artwork you selected set the mood well for this paranormal adventure. I liked your reference to the "website" in the opening paragraph to indicate the contemporary time period. Your specific details like the "Corolla" and the "gust of arctic air" made the setting come quickly to life. Thanks for the examples of "discarnate entities" and interesting characters in Mike and Mia too. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Thanks, Joan. I appreciate your insights into what makes the chapter more contemporary and authentic. It's nice to hear the impressions of various readers - helps in going forward. :) Bev

reply by Joan E. on 09-Sep-2014

I always admire your storytelling ability and am pleased to share my reactions. Keep up your excellent work. More hugs- Joan

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

AW, thanks so much, Joan. :))

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

Paranormal investigation of a haunted manor Paranormal Adventures 'Bellingham Manor.' This is such a good chapter you have created here. I enjoyed the power in the narrative, and the structure of your work was solid. Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Thank you so much, chasennov. It's quite different in that I have four main protagonists! Nothing like making things difficult. So appreciate your generous and encouraging review, my friend.

:) Bev

reply by chasennov on 09-Sep-2014

You are always most welcome, Bev.

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

:))

Comment from Rosalyne

Exceptional

Hi, Bev.
This is another great chapter. Paranormal activity is an exciting topic, and Mia's ability as a medium is fascinating. Your attention to details and dialogue is excellent, placing the reader immediately in the story. The caretaker is a great addition to the story, a man of eerie mystery.

I am glued to a television show called, Long Island Medium. I find it remarkable how Theresa Capputo can channel spirit.

Great topic for a book. I can't wait for more.
Bye
Hugs
Rosalyne :)

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014

Thanks so much, Rosalyne. I think it's wonderful when honest mediums can offer solace to suffering people. It's a gift, for sure.

Sure appreciate your awesome review, my friend. Hugs, Bev

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Hi Bev, my dear,

You mind works in the most amazing manner, my dear friend.

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Got your e-mail. Will reply soon. There never seems to be sufficient time in the day to get everything done.

The countdown has started ... yeah!!

xxx

Sonali

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014

Yes, I do plan to give you a call before the visit just to touch base and confirm everything if you don't mind. I believe you gave me your number already. I'll let you know when I plan to call just to make sure you'll be home. Can't wait!!

Yes, my mind is a rather strange place at times LoL.

Thanks for the great review... Love you!

reply by Selina Stambi on 08-Sep-2014

Look forward to putting our strange minds together, doll! Am planning a huge baby shower for a friend's daughter at the moment. The good news is my aunt and uncle have changed their plans. I tried to sound disappointed when she told me - I think I did well! Hugs and love xxx

Comment from onebrit

Excellent

well this certainly grabbed my attention...what a great concept. Your dialogue is wonderfully believable and the characters sympathetic and well developed. I really enjoyed it and cant wait to find out what happens next.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014

Thanks so much, onebrit. I appreciate your generous and encouraging review. :) Bev

Comment from Jackreese

Excellent

I love Ghost Hunters and Scariest Places on earth and this had all the elements of those shows and than some. Added plus for it being an actual crime. I will definitely keep my eye out for more.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014

Thanks so much, Jackreese. I really appreciate that you took time to read my chapter. I'm a lover of all things paranormal. I see those shows and anything else along those lines. I'm really stoked that it looks like Grant is coming back to GhostHunters when they debut in October. I knew he wouldn't stay away forever.

Thanks so much for the great review.

:) Bev

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Writingfundimension: It's been months since I've been on site, so this is the first of your work I've read since March. I had forgotten how much I liked reading your work. I'm not sure how often I'm going to be on - depends on how soon my consulting job with the school system begins and how many hours a week I have to work. At any rate, I hope to be able to follow this book. Think it's going to be a winner.

Love,
Jan

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014

Hi, Jan. So nice to hear from you! Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to read my chapter. I'm really happy you liked it. Hugs, Bev

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

The foundation appears to be set and now us readers will get to see your story build from the oncoming conflicts. I can hardly wait. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014

Thank you so much, Ric. I really appreciate this very encouraging review! :) Bev