Steve's Story-Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Cherchez La Femme"A collection of my poems
95 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
well you know what they teach in the feminine guide book don't you kiwisteveh? Behind every great feminine woman is a stupid man who follows his cock and forgets to turn the lights on...ooopss hope I didn't offend the 49% of the population that's left to read this particular one...lol...good rant my friend xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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well you know what they teach in the feminine guide book don't you kiwisteveh? Behind every great feminine woman is a stupid man who follows his cock and forgets to turn the lights on...ooopss hope I didn't offend the 49% of the population that's left to read this particular one...lol...good rant my friend xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 26-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Thank you for that, I think...
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lol yeah "think" now that a good word...lol xoxo Kiwi
Comment from JennieClare
This was such a good read - I took as a bit tongue in cheek although whoever should trust a woman?! I'm sure that there wouldn't be enough space to write one about the wrongs of man though!! jennieclare
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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This was such a good read - I took as a bit tongue in cheek although whoever should trust a woman?! I'm sure that there wouldn't be enough space to write one about the wrongs of man though!! jennieclare
Comment Written 26-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Tut, tut! How can you say that Man has ever done anything wrong? It's just that you devious women don't understand and appreciate us! Thanks for the review and the six stars - bit of a shooting star yourself I see with a flood of good work since you joined...
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Hehehehehe! Jennie
Comment from Thomas Raine
I really enjoyed this, quite a history buff myself, so this was entertaining on many different levels. You managed to keep a tight, control flow throughout without hindering the content. An excellent write, my friend,
- TR
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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I really enjoyed this, quite a history buff myself, so this was entertaining on many different levels. You managed to keep a tight, control flow throughout without hindering the content. An excellent write, my friend,
- TR
Comment Written 26-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Thanks for that - I'm NOT a history buff, so just general knowledge stuff for me - I had to check up on a few things for this. You may be interested to know that I am planning a Brief History' series - Britain, America, the World (that'll be a doozie!), Eng Literature etc. I can see I'll be doing a fair bit of research to make sure I don't get it all wrong!
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That actually sounds quite interesting, I'll have to keep tabs on you!
Comment from Kingsland
You have a poetic walk through time here. This must have took a bit of time just to write and research all the facts. I enjoyed reading and writing a response for this most excellent piece of poetic artistry... John
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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You have a poetic walk through time here. This must have took a bit of time just to write and research all the facts. I enjoyed reading and writing a response for this most excellent piece of poetic artistry... John
Comment Written 26-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Thanks for your kind words!
Comment from Deejharrington
No it didn't offend, it made me laugh out loud. You have a real talent for breaking things down and making them humorous. I think we ladies are strong enough to take the blame, like they say "don't hate me because I'm beautiful" You can't live with us (apparently), but you can't live without us.
deb
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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No it didn't offend, it made me laugh out loud. You have a real talent for breaking things down and making them humorous. I think we ladies are strong enough to take the blame, like they say "don't hate me because I'm beautiful" You can't live with us (apparently), but you can't live without us.
deb
Comment Written 26-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Thanks for the review - good to get positive feedback as I'm planning to extend this into a series - 'Brief History of... Britain, USA, TV, anything really'
Comment from stephybs
This is excellent work, and very well written. What a great way of showing history with vision on women! very nice and easy read. loved it! stephy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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This is excellent work, and very well written. What a great way of showing history with vision on women! very nice and easy read. loved it! stephy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from frelanz
LOL...LOVE it...well written and quite comical! I must say, us women really do rule this world! Very enjoyable to read! So, has your wife seen this? LOL.. well done. Dawn :o)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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LOL...LOVE it...well written and quite comical! I must say, us women really do rule this world! Very enjoyable to read! So, has your wife seen this? LOL.. well done. Dawn :o)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Thank you - I am hoping enough people like this sort of thing, as I have an idea for a kind of series of 'Brief Histories'
Comment from Page 3
Where were you when I was at school doing history? No, neither of us was born. You had a lot of fun writing and I had immense fun reading to the summation. It was fun to start with and then it got into even greater word play (from Helen, I think). A rollicking expose of my antecedents - and, now you can add Liz Taylor!
I thought of leaving out 'Trojan' There is a comma before so it will still mean the same. Just a thought. Great fun!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Where were you when I was at school doing history? No, neither of us was born. You had a lot of fun writing and I had immense fun reading to the summation. It was fun to start with and then it got into even greater word play (from Helen, I think). A rollicking expose of my antecedents - and, now you can add Liz Taylor!
I thought of leaving out 'Trojan' There is a comma before so it will still mean the same. Just a thought. Great fun!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for that - Yes, it was quite a fun poem to write and nice to know it is making people smile. As for Liz Taylor, she might make it into a planned 'Brief History of the Movies'.
Comment from Inge_Meldgaard
I can cope, despite being female ;P It's funny, well written, with a good rhythm and I particularly like the last two verses...silly men, eh? One thing though, the guillotine is usually referred to as Madame la Guillotine, isn't it?
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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I can cope, despite being female ;P It's funny, well written, with a good rhythm and I particularly like the last two verses...silly men, eh? One thing though, the guillotine is usually referred to as Madame la Guillotine, isn't it?
Comment Written 26-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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My bad! As an ex French teacher I should have known that!
Comment from sngldad4gd
Hahahaha! I don't think anyone will find offense anywhere in this well written piece showing the importance and power of women throughout history. But for some reason, I feel many a women smirking and saying "Oh yeah you better believe it" Well done, well done. Ray :)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Hahahaha! I don't think anyone will find offense anywhere in this well written piece showing the importance and power of women throughout history. But for some reason, I feel many a women smirking and saying "Oh yeah you better believe it" Well done, well done. Ray :)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2011
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Thank you - yeah, it's just a bit of fun really.
