Forever Mine
a twisted tale of jealousy16 total reviews
Comment from Writeaway...
A clever job on this, mystery writer, bravo. Your writing was well-written and cleverly constructed, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, good luck in the contest, keep writing!! :)
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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A clever job on this, mystery writer, bravo. Your writing was well-written and cleverly constructed, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, good luck in the contest, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Thanks Jakeyboy. I appreciate your great review and good wishes. Your support is heart-warming. Best regards.
Comment from MizKat
I had to read this a couple of times before I got it. At least I think I did. Another woman killed the baby's mother so she could have the father and his child? Good job!!!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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I had to read this a couple of times before I got it. At least I think I did. Another woman killed the baby's mother so she could have the father and his child? Good job!!!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Thanks MizKat. I appreciate you taking time to read the story - which is as you stated in your review. Much appreciate you taking time to read and send along your encouragement. You are most kind. Blessings.
Comment from Aletheia
That ending is creepy. I like the opening paragraph too.
It seems so difficult to build a scene in so few words, but you did a good job. Good luck with the contest! B :)
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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That ending is creepy. I like the opening paragraph too.
It seems so difficult to build a scene in so few words, but you did a good job. Good luck with the contest! B :)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Thanks begonia. Nice to meet you! Thanks so much for taking time to send along your wonderful review. I much appreciate the good wishes as well.
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from Kentucky Jim
Wow! The last several lines caused the hair on the back of my neck to stand up! This is really an excellent development of a hair raising scene. So well done in such a short amount of words. Again, wow!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Wow! The last several lines caused the hair on the back of my neck to stand up! This is really an excellent development of a hair raising scene. So well done in such a short amount of words. Again, wow!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Thank you so very much for your exceptional review! I am very honored by your gesture and, even more, that you enjoyed the piece. You have truly warmed the cockles of my heart!
Comment from amahra
Great writing. I was taken into the drama very quickly. I thought the writing showed the excitment of the characters very well. Great job.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Great writing. I was taken into the drama very quickly. I thought the writing showed the excitment of the characters very well. Great job.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Thanks so much amahra. I am really tickled by your really wonderful review. Glad you liked the story! Much appreciate the support.
Comment from Gungalo
Oooooooooooooh, scaryyyyyyyyyyyyy. LOL, I love it. For a short piece this one is a real grabber!!! Well done, widow's walk and all!!!
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Oooooooooooooh, scaryyyyyyyyyyyyy. LOL, I love it. For a short piece this one is a real grabber!!! Well done, widow's walk and all!!!
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2011
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Thanks Gungalo. I'm so happy you liked it. Thanks for taking time out to read it and offer your great review!! Best wishes.
