Carrier Pigeon
a soldier's hope54 total reviews
Comment from mountainwriter49
This is an interesting poem and one that
does cause the reader to reflect on the
importance of the carrier pigeon in battles
of yesteryear. You've well captured the emotion
of setting the bird off on its mission.
-ray
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2011
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This is an interesting poem and one that
does cause the reader to reflect on the
importance of the carrier pigeon in battles
of yesteryear. You've well captured the emotion
of setting the bird off on its mission.
-ray
Comment Written 19-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2011
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Thank you Ray.
Comment from Fireshadow
fellow stout winged warrior - stunning line, Victor
I really enjoyed this beautifully poignant poem and tribute to the valiant carrier pigeon and it's significant role in war zones. Excellent work, my friend.
Ama
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2011
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fellow stout winged warrior - stunning line, Victor
I really enjoyed this beautifully poignant poem and tribute to the valiant carrier pigeon and it's significant role in war zones. Excellent work, my friend.
Ama
Comment Written 19-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2011
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Thank you Doctor.
Comment from MaineAuthor
Hello,
I like the use of language you use in this poem. Very graceful and creative. I can see the picture you are making. I also like the way you used the bird to mirror your own life.
I am wondering, what is the fate of the narrator? What is it that they fear?
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2011
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Hello,
I like the use of language you use in this poem. Very graceful and creative. I can see the picture you are making. I also like the way you used the bird to mirror your own life.
I am wondering, what is the fate of the narrator? What is it that they fear?
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2011
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Thank you.
Comment from Gungalo
No I can't imagine that but it was a technique used and it did work, right? A wonderful little write about this awesome little bird and it's valiant bravery!!!
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2011
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No I can't imagine that but it was a technique used and it did work, right? A wonderful little write about this awesome little bird and it's valiant bravery!!!
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2011
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Thank you Ms. Gungalo.
