A SnowAngel For Luther
Snowdreams25 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
Oh this story is heavenly,
I love how the story moves
and how deep ones belief and ever lasting love is. Your story is perfect for the artwork you picked.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Oh this story is heavenly,
I love how the story moves
and how deep ones belief and ever lasting love is. Your story is perfect for the artwork you picked.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Hi Cookie! Hugs and a thousand thank you's for this kind review. I have to go to the doctor today Cookie, I will read for you this evening!! Thank you for being here for me...love, susan
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good write, Hi I like this Susan,You have described your characters well. A pleasant to read. A good write,Thanks for sharing with me. Mary.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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A good write, Hi I like this Susan,You have described your characters well. A pleasant to read. A good write,Thanks for sharing with me. Mary.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Hi Mary!! HUGS for reading this! I had a fun time but almost didn't get it done in time! ") you are welcome and your time for me Mary, is always appreciated. I am honored to know you enjoyed this so!! ") Happy writing to you and I hope I havn't missed any of your stuff??? HUGS and smiles...susan
Comment from Dave M
Susan,
This one is really good. All kinds of people with all kinds of unrequited dreams. Hope Luther's dream woman was all he desired.
I enjoyed this post and have one comment:
"She looked around at her husband, who was dually [duly - actually, I don't think you need a word here at all.] trying to ignore the whole situation,..."
Dave
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Susan,
This one is really good. All kinds of people with all kinds of unrequited dreams. Hope Luther's dream woman was all he desired.
I enjoyed this post and have one comment:
"She looked around at her husband, who was dually [duly - actually, I don't think you need a word here at all.] trying to ignore the whole situation,..."
Dave
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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HI Dave! Thank you! I removed the word, you are right, it was not needed! I was still working on this at midnight, so I really appreciate your help. I have had an awful time getting my pc to work at all. I am honored that you liked this so...Thank you again!! Susan
Comment from Espresso momma
Sweet story. For true there are a lot of Luther's out there. Why not dance naked in the yard? Life gets too dull anyway at times. lol. Thanks for sharing that cute story.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Sweet story. For true there are a lot of Luther's out there. Why not dance naked in the yard? Life gets too dull anyway at times. lol. Thanks for sharing that cute story.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Hi there! Thank you so much for this kind and encouraging review...I am so happy you enjoyed it! You are welcome and I hope you smiled...hug! Susan
Comment from Narvik
Susan, this is hysterical! Then incredibly touching in the end. I've never seen you write a story quite like this one before. I laughed out loud at all three characters, then the end was heart-wrenching. I'm not the sentimental type, but it kind of got to me.
twenty six (everyone tells me to use hyphens with these)
Lordy. now (Did you mean a comma there instead of a period?)
Ethyl's Noseby's (obvious typo)
the sound of adulterous desires in them. (I'd ditch the "in them". It kinda looks tacked on here)
pillow . (space typo)
Super job all the way around, Susan. This story had everything, and in such a short space. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Susan, this is hysterical! Then incredibly touching in the end. I've never seen you write a story quite like this one before. I laughed out loud at all three characters, then the end was heart-wrenching. I'm not the sentimental type, but it kind of got to me.
twenty six (everyone tells me to use hyphens with these)
Lordy. now (Did you mean a comma there instead of a period?)
Ethyl's Noseby's (obvious typo)
the sound of adulterous desires in them. (I'd ditch the "in them". It kinda looks tacked on here)
pillow . (space typo)
Super job all the way around, Susan. This story had everything, and in such a short space. Keep it up!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Hi Erik!! How did you know I needed a boost and a smile?? Thank you for this kind rating...I was still finishing this tho, if you get a minute please read it again? I almost missed the deadline! ? AND thank you for this great help too. I have made the repairs! I am thrilled and honored that you liked this so...I wish you a wonderful week my friend! Susan
