A SnowAngel For Luther
Snowdreams25 total reviews
Comment from sunny39
A great entry for the contest. I found Ethyl hillarious. I can imagine the shock of the nosey neighbor.
The ending was beautiful. I was sorry for the lonely man, but his desire and love and happiness brought the angel into his dream.
A great ending.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2011
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A great entry for the contest. I found Ethyl hillarious. I can imagine the shock of the nosey neighbor.
The ending was beautiful. I was sorry for the lonely man, but his desire and love and happiness brought the angel into his dream.
A great ending.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2011
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HI Sunny! Hugs for this kind and most welcome review! I love hearing from you and hope you had a nice Valentine's Day!! ") Susan
Comment from c_lucas
Now to have her come out of his dreams and into his reality. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2011
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Now to have her come out of his dreams and into his reality. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2011
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Hi Charlie! Thank you!! I am so glad you approved of this one! It was fun to do. I hope all is well with you and thank you again my friend... ") Susan
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You're welcome, Susan. Charlie
Comment from humpwhistle
Yes, Susan. I like this story so much. In fact, I've done some naked anti-snow dancing myself this winter. The neighbors remind my of the Cravitz's from Bewitched. I like that Luther got his snow angel in the end---oh, I didn't it mean it like that.
Great job, Suse. Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2011
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Yes, Susan. I like this story so much. In fact, I've done some naked anti-snow dancing myself this winter. The neighbors remind my of the Cravitz's from Bewitched. I like that Luther got his snow angel in the end---oh, I didn't it mean it like that.
Great job, Suse. Peace, Lee
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2011
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Hi Lee, Thank you for another warm and funny review...I always enjoy hearing from you, and I sure hope you are feeling better? Please take care! I look forward to your next post! Also, I hope you will enter the humor contest! You can win it! ") S.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is so cute, i enjoyed reading this story about luther and the dancing he did to entice his neighbor and then he was enticed by his own angel. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2011
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this is so cute, i enjoyed reading this story about luther and the dancing he did to entice his neighbor and then he was enticed by his own angel. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2011
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Hi Sweet Winner!! ") Thank you very much! This was not for a contest, but still, I am thankful for your encouraging comments and time for me too!! Happy writing! love, susan
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
The Nosebys sound like my neighbors only they would have called the cops. They seem to think my business is their business and delight in finding fault with it. They have never even offered me a morsel of help since my accident-oops that sound kind of bitter doesn't it. To each his own-I just wish they would leave me alone!Have a great day! Luv ya! Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2011
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The Nosebys sound like my neighbors only they would have called the cops. They seem to think my business is their business and delight in finding fault with it. They have never even offered me a morsel of help since my accident-oops that sound kind of bitter doesn't it. To each his own-I just wish they would leave me alone!Have a great day! Luv ya! Debbie
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2011
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Hi Debbie. Thank you! AND I am sorry you have bad neighbors. I will have to tell you about ours someday. OMG! KKK HELL! ") JUST lovely...This is such a lovely place. BUT The people are awful, most of them anyway. Please stay safe and away from idiots...and thank you for reading for me...xoxo, susan
Comment from wiskas677@yandex.ru
This is pretty. You have a wonderful sense of atmosphere here and a lot of humor, as well. Luther seemed sad and lonely, but coping with life and winter... nice work
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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This is pretty. You have a wonderful sense of atmosphere here and a lot of humor, as well. Luther seemed sad and lonely, but coping with life and winter... nice work
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Hi there! Thank you Miss Wiskas! I am really happy you liked this...I hope to goodness WINTER leaves SOON!! Boy. It's great to hear from you!! ") Susan
Comment from anne1204
Very funny and cute valentine story. I hope Harry's snow angel works out for him. Nosey neighbors are great characters for humor. Very good details and imagery in this story. Anne
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Very funny and cute valentine story. I hope Harry's snow angel works out for him. Nosey neighbors are great characters for humor. Very good details and imagery in this story. Anne
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Hi again! Thank you once more my dear friend. This was a just for fun one, inspired by another fanfriend with a great sense of humor! ") Thanks again Anne! xoxo...susan
Comment from BethShelby
This is an excellent story for Valentine's Day. The raindance is funny. I could just see this part Indian well endowed man out dancing around in the nude in the snow and the lady at the window looking out in lust. It was a little confusing just when the snow angel formed in the yard. At first it seemed to be before the rain dance but later it seemed to be after he did his dance and went to bed.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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This is an excellent story for Valentine's Day. The raindance is funny. I could just see this part Indian well endowed man out dancing around in the nude in the snow and the lady at the window looking out in lust. It was a little confusing just when the snow angel formed in the yard. At first it seemed to be before the rain dance but later it seemed to be after he did his dance and went to bed.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Hi Beth!! You were right! This wasn't so clear, so I tried to add some to the ending? Let me know if you think it's okay? Worse, better? I respect and appreciate your ideas alot! It's nice to hear from you Beth!! ") Susan
Comment from Mustang Patty
This story is lovely and bittersweet. I'm glad he was holding onto the good memories of he and Brenda, but my heart aches that his sadness is so deep. Your chosen artwork and the line of the story work well together. ~patty~
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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This story is lovely and bittersweet. I'm glad he was holding onto the good memories of he and Brenda, but my heart aches that his sadness is so deep. Your chosen artwork and the line of the story work well together. ~patty~
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Hi Patty! Thank you very much! I'm happy to hear from you, and hope you liked the attempt at humor too...") HUGS for this kind review!! Susan
Comment from Trybuck
I think Ethyl would like to be his personal snow angel and maybe Luther secretly hopes it is Ethyl. Winter has a way of bringing the strange and bizarre out of people.
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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I think Ethyl would like to be his personal snow angel and maybe Luther secretly hopes it is Ethyl. Winter has a way of bringing the strange and bizarre out of people.
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 15-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2011
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Hi Buck! LOL!! Literally! I hadn't thought of that angle! ") You're probably right...Ethyl is an odd bird! I had to "throw" her down for being such an awful neighbor! ") Thank you Buck! ") Susan
