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Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Ruler"...musings on the pets I've had
15 total reviews
Comment from Dave M
Patty,
So Simba rules. Some cats are like that. I enjoyed reading this poem and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2011
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Patty,
So Simba rules. Some cats are like that. I enjoyed reading this poem and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 14-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2011
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Thank you for reading my pet poems. This is an undertaking and it is fun to learn these new styles. ~patty~
Comment from judy corcoran
lol
'Self-proclaimed Ruler of the House'
- isn't that just like a cat....
love the photo
and the acknowledgement (for simba because he's been waiting :) )
love and hugs
judy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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lol
'Self-proclaimed Ruler of the House'
- isn't that just like a cat....
love the photo
and the acknowledgement (for simba because he's been waiting :) )
love and hugs
judy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. I'm so glad you saw the acknowledgement - Simba insisted!! ~patty~
Comment from Gungalo
Great write but not one of my favorite styles. LOL. Love the pic and he surely looks like the ruler of the house girl. You spoil him I know. He looks so regal!!!!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Great write but not one of my favorite styles. LOL. Love the pic and he surely looks like the ruler of the house girl. You spoil him I know. He looks so regal!!!!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2011
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Yes, Simba is VERY spoiled or at least he was until Harley got here. Now, he thinks he has a horrible life! LOL! There are about 30 more styles in this book to get through, but I really like the Whitney style, and the Rondeau - though I've not yet successfully written one~~ ~patty~
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Oh you will though, girl, you will. It's really pretty simple, just keep track of your lines. Love the stories you tell of these guys!!!! Have a beautiful day!!!
Comment from adewpearl
You have followed the syllable count well for this form, Patty, though I don't pretend to understand the who Fibonacci thing. LOL I love your use of the multi-syllable "luxurious" for its flow, and it also describes the fur in such a vivid way
And I absolutely love the final line - it is so "cat-like." :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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You have followed the syllable count well for this form, Patty, though I don't pretend to understand the who Fibonacci thing. LOL I love your use of the multi-syllable "luxurious" for its flow, and it also describes the fur in such a vivid way
And I absolutely love the final line - it is so "cat-like." :-) Brooke
Comment Written 10-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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Thank you for reading my latest pet poem. This was a fun poetic form and I was intrigued by its history. Simba is just a bit full of himself right now. He keeps telling Harley that he is famous AND the King around here. LOL! ~patty~
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi Patty,
What a beautiful and intriguing poem! I love this. Just fascinating. You did a spectacular job of it and I can't wait to try some myself, both the word and the syllable types. I'd never heard of a Fibonnacki poem before though I had heard of the magical Fibonnacki sequence. Both your little poem and the picure have a magic all their own.
Thanks so much for sharing. Hugs, W ^-^
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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Hi Patty,
What a beautiful and intriguing poem! I love this. Just fascinating. You did a spectacular job of it and I can't wait to try some myself, both the word and the syllable types. I'd never heard of a Fibonnacki poem before though I had heard of the magical Fibonnacki sequence. Both your little poem and the picure have a magic all their own.
Thanks so much for sharing. Hugs, W ^-^
Comment Written 10-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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Thank you so much for reading this latest pet poem. I couldn't believe that there was a form based on the Fibonnaci sequence either -- how weird! It was a fun write and Simba feels a bit better now. ~patty~
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Please give Simba a scratch behind the ear tonight for me! :-) ^-^
Comment from MizKat
Patty - I like your poem. It's a new style again that I've never heard of before, so I copied you author notes and saved it in my file for Poetry Styles. Maybe one day I'll try to learn the. You did a great job on this. Kat
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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Patty - I like your poem. It's a new style again that I've never heard of before, so I copied you author notes and saved it in my file for Poetry Styles. Maybe one day I'll try to learn the. You did a great job on this. Kat
Comment Written 10-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. I'm enjoying learning the different types of poetic forms. The author of the book I'm using says they are 42 'classic forms,' but most of us haven't heard of them. It gives me a chance to stretch my wings a bit. Thanks for reading along. ~patty~
Comment from happy to be here
Great poem and thank you for explaining the format. It gives a good sense of the cat's ownership of your home and reminds me of my daughter's ownership of mine! well done
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Great poem and thank you for explaining the format. It gives a good sense of the cat's ownership of your home and reminds me of my daughter's ownership of mine! well done
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. It is fun to try new poetic forms, and I LOVE writing about my pets! ~patty~
Comment from MAMONIA
No doubt the cat owns you and not the other
way around. The ruler, you say, how cute.
You are a magnificent poet and I love all
the different kinds of poetry you have showed me.
I never thought I could learn so much from one
person, but you proved me wrong.
This is great, as is all your works.
Good luck, my friend. Marie.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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No doubt the cat owns you and not the other
way around. The ruler, you say, how cute.
You are a magnificent poet and I love all
the different kinds of poetry you have showed me.
I never thought I could learn so much from one
person, but you proved me wrong.
This is great, as is all your works.
Good luck, my friend. Marie.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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What a kind and lovely thing to say~ Thank you for reading and the generous review and for letting me know I've helped you in some small way. ~patty~
Comment from jmdg1954
Interesting.... fibonacci always interested me, as I enjoy math, but never thought it to be used in poetry. I may have to give that a shot one day. Nicely done poem for Simba. I don't have any cats but our two dogs kinda rule the domain as in top priority.
John
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Interesting.... fibonacci always interested me, as I enjoy math, but never thought it to be used in poetry. I may have to give that a shot one day. Nicely done poem for Simba. I don't have any cats but our two dogs kinda rule the domain as in top priority.
John
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you for reading and the generous review. I'm glad you enjoyed Simba's poem. ~patty~
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Symba looks just like one of my cats! This is a cute and lightheartedly enjoyable poem. I hadn't heard of this form before-always good to learn something new! At my house, the dog definitely rules even though the cats were here first. Take care! Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Symba looks just like one of my cats! This is a cute and lightheartedly enjoyable poem. I hadn't heard of this form before-always good to learn something new! At my house, the dog definitely rules even though the cats were here first. Take care! Debbie
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you for reading the latest pet poem! It is kind of fun to try all of these different types of poems. It can't hurt to learn something new - I'm glad you enjoyed it. How big is your cat? Simba weighs about 22 pounds. He is HUGE! ~patty~
