Another Pretty Face
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Comment from The Stranger
A happy ending, bore through the horrors of war, whilst a new life awaits the soon to be newly weds, many lives lay shattered in the deserts of Iraq
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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A happy ending, bore through the horrors of war, whilst a new life awaits the soon to be newly weds, many lives lay shattered in the deserts of Iraq
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
It is a wonderful story and you told it in a positive way. I enjoyed reading every chapter. I will wait for your next book. I saw no need for editing. Live long and prosper.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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It is a wonderful story and you told it in a positive way. I enjoyed reading every chapter. I will wait for your next book. I saw no need for editing. Live long and prosper.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from marcellawachtel
Beautiful ending. I, too am one of those who thought he was entirely too bossy; ok, it isn't exactly the right word, but I feel he should have shown her the respect of sharing all the planning. (OK, not the engagement ring). I wish you a huge success with this very deserving book, a good start with the next one and a speedy recovery. Marcella
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Beautiful ending. I, too am one of those who thought he was entirely too bossy; ok, it isn't exactly the right word, but I feel he should have shown her the respect of sharing all the planning. (OK, not the engagement ring). I wish you a huge success with this very deserving book, a good start with the next one and a speedy recovery. Marcella
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Barbara:
I think you should leave the ending as is because it
is reasonable for a man of action like Joe to do something
like this -- after all, he has lots of contacts and is
used to getting things done in a hurry. I think it is
enough that Sara made it clear she would not tolerate
total control by Joe after the wedding.
I loved this book. Hope you are continuing to tolerate
your chemo as well as possible.
love,
jan
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Barbara:
I think you should leave the ending as is because it
is reasonable for a man of action like Joe to do something
like this -- after all, he has lots of contacts and is
used to getting things done in a hurry. I think it is
enough that Sara made it clear she would not tolerate
total control by Joe after the wedding.
I loved this book. Hope you are continuing to tolerate
your chemo as well as possible.
love,
jan
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
This is an excellent end to an exceptional book. I'd give it a six-star review, but Fanstory won't let me.
About Joe planning the wedding, I don't think that's so unrealistic for a man in his line of work - they have to be "take charge" people or they end up behind desks. Sara's getting pissed about this is clearly realistic, as is her jumping into his arms as soon as she had made her point.
I enjoyed this read and found a couple of unimportant formatting nits:
"When he got close enough for her to hear, he
(there's a spurious line break here)
said,..."
"This is the new me. I plan on standing up for myself."
The paragraph after this line is not properly spaced out.
Dave
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Barbara,
This is an excellent end to an exceptional book. I'd give it a six-star review, but Fanstory won't let me.
About Joe planning the wedding, I don't think that's so unrealistic for a man in his line of work - they have to be "take charge" people or they end up behind desks. Sara's getting pissed about this is clearly realistic, as is her jumping into his arms as soon as she had made her point.
I enjoyed this read and found a couple of unimportant formatting nits:
"When he got close enough for her to hear, he
(there's a spurious line break here)
said,..."
"This is the new me. I plan on standing up for myself."
The paragraph after this line is not properly spaced out.
Dave
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Evil Eddie has played with my spacing. Thank you for your kind review and support. I always listen to what you have to say.
Comment from L.lora
This was a dynamite addition.
I think you address the issue
of planning very well--and have
known fellas that do that sort of
thing even if romantic it can be
very irritating... Good flow, great
discriptions and excellent dialogue.
" (Do you have to rub it my face too?)" need to reword.
Get rest and take care of you so
we'll be able to have more wonderful
stories from your accomplished pen. Lora
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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This was a dynamite addition.
I think you address the issue
of planning very well--and have
known fellas that do that sort of
thing even if romantic it can be
very irritating... Good flow, great
discriptions and excellent dialogue.
" (Do you have to rub it my face too?)" need to reword.
Get rest and take care of you so
we'll be able to have more wonderful
stories from your accomplished pen. Lora
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You are most welcome. L
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A Good write I was caught up in the characters of your story and it held my interest. I enjoyed reading your script. THANKS FOR SHARING WITH ME.MARY
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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A Good write I was caught up in the characters of your story and it held my interest. I enjoyed reading your script. THANKS FOR SHARING WITH ME.MARY
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bowls
A beautifu; ending. I couldn't have asked for a better one.I like the idea of the man planning the wedding because it's such an original concept and i think it's entirely in character for Joe. Thanks for a great story. I've enjoyed every word of every chapter.I do hope your health improves and there will be more novels in the near future.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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A beautifu; ending. I couldn't have asked for a better one.I like the idea of the man planning the wedding because it's such an original concept and i think it's entirely in character for Joe. Thanks for a great story. I've enjoyed every word of every chapter.I do hope your health improves and there will be more novels in the near future.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
What a lovely way to end this book. I was concerned when he was making all those decisions for her. Every one wants some say in the planning but as long as he knows he messed up and she forgives him, I think all's well that ends well. I've enjoyed reading this story.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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What a lovely way to end this book. I was concerned when he was making all those decisions for her. Every one wants some say in the planning but as long as he knows he messed up and she forgives him, I think all's well that ends well. I've enjoyed reading this story.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Way to go, Sara!!!--"Everything sounds perfect, but I'd like some say in my own life." She started to walk off, but then came back. "I'd like some say in which house I live in, who's going to care for the house I own, which city I live in, and who's the father of my child." Moisture welled in her eyes. "I'd even like to decide on my own underwear."
Got a chuckle here: "I'm asking if you'd like to go bowling." "That's not the question I expected." "I thought maybe I should start from the beginning."
A happy day for all concerned--readers included :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Way to go, Sara!!!--"Everything sounds perfect, but I'd like some say in my own life." She started to walk off, but then came back. "I'd like some say in which house I live in, who's going to care for the house I own, which city I live in, and who's the father of my child." Moisture welled in her eyes. "I'd even like to decide on my own underwear."
Got a chuckle here: "I'm asking if you'd like to go bowling." "That's not the question I expected." "I thought maybe I should start from the beginning."
A happy day for all concerned--readers included :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind reveiw and support.
