Another Pretty Face
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Comment from Readywriter52
Sara finally agreed to marry Joe, but not until she made him suffer. She was a little angry because he made all the plans without consulting her. Once she got that out of the way, she agreed to marry him.
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Sara finally agreed to marry Joe, but not until she made him suffer. She was a little angry because he made all the plans without consulting her. Once she got that out of the way, she agreed to marry him.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from rkstata
Yay! I loved the end, and I didn't care if Joe planned the wedding without Sara, it was the end to a really great book, but I will have to catch up on all of it. Congratulations! I gave you six stars because I loved it and I'm happy for you.
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Yay! I loved the end, and I didn't care if Joe planned the wedding without Sara, it was the end to a really great book, but I will have to catch up on all of it. Congratulations! I gave you six stars because I loved it and I'm happy for you.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from JW
Ahh. A beautiful ending. Yet, as the story was coming to an end - maybe I was imagining things, but I could have sworn I was seeing the beginning of a future novel.
Good job!
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Ahh. A beautiful ending. Yet, as the story was coming to an end - maybe I was imagining things, but I could have sworn I was seeing the beginning of a future novel.
Good job!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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I will be writing about my Task Force friends. They have become part of me. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Tellis
Whew! For a minute there I thought she was going to screw this up at the last moment, LoL. He is a take charge kind of guy, but she's been independant for a long time and that wouldn't sit well. I think he did a good job though.
Tellis
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Whew! For a minute there I thought she was going to screw this up at the last moment, LoL. He is a take charge kind of guy, but she's been independant for a long time and that wouldn't sit well. I think he did a good job though.
Tellis
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support. I appreciate both.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Well done Barbara! A fabulous effort to write a whole book and such a successful romance. I loved the ending. I thought it was very romantic for Joe to make all the arrangements, like a sort of knight in shining armour.
Giddy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Well done Barbara! A fabulous effort to write a whole book and such a successful romance. I loved the ending. I thought it was very romantic for Joe to make all the arrangements, like a sort of knight in shining armour.
Giddy
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from tango494
I love this story. I can't wait to go back and read more. Your work flows so well and the story is engrossing. This has truly been a pleasure to read and review.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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I love this story. I can't wait to go back and read more. Your work flows so well and the story is engrossing. This has truly been a pleasure to read and review.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from lindafoldy
This flows really well.
When/if this goes to print, you'll to double check some of the line/paragraph spacing.
Otherwise, this gets your story across nicely
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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This flows really well.
When/if this goes to print, you'll to double check some of the line/paragraph spacing.
Otherwise, this gets your story across nicely
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Evil Eddie loves to play with spacing. My orginal manuscript doesn't have that problem. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
I like the story as is.
You might want to check the posting. There is a large space between the first and second paragraph, probably because of rhe long line 'divider.' I almost turned off of the story because I thought it wasn't finished; until I realized that the rest of it was further down.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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I like the story as is.
You might want to check the posting. There is a large space between the first and second paragraph, probably because of rhe long line 'divider.' I almost turned off of the story because I thought it wasn't finished; until I realized that the rest of it was further down.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Evil Eddie at it again. You're the first one to say anything. Thank you.
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You're quite welcome!
Comment from pickthorn
Great story. Joe is my kind of take charge guy. This story is well written and suspenseful. I'm glad it has a happy ending. You are truly a talented writer. Goodluck with the book and get well soon.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Great story. Joe is my kind of take charge guy. This story is well written and suspenseful. I'm glad it has a happy ending. You are truly a talented writer. Goodluck with the book and get well soon.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Goyle
Good, but the writing feels sparse - more details (like what they are wearing, what's going through their minds, what expressions are on their faces) would help a great deal. As I love happy endings, this gets a 4 star. Keep writing!
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Good, but the writing feels sparse - more details (like what they are wearing, what's going through their minds, what expressions are on their faces) would help a great deal. As I love happy endings, this gets a 4 star. Keep writing!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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If you had followed my previous chapters your questions would have been answered. Thank you for your kind review.
